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Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  24 March 2026

Stevan Weine
Affiliation:
Psychiatry, University of Illinois Chicago, USA
Aliriza Arenliu
Affiliation:
Psychology, University of Prishtina Hasan Prishtina, Kosovo
Vahdet Gormez
Affiliation:
Psychology, Hamad Bin Khalifa University, Qatar
Mary Bunn
Affiliation:
Psychiatry, University of Illinois Chicago, USA
Chloe Polutnik Smith*
Affiliation:
Psychiatry, University of Illinois Chicago, USA
Hakan Demirtas
Affiliation:
School of Public Health, University of Illinois Chicago, USA
*
Corresponding author: Chloe Polutnik Smith; Email: cpolut2@uic.edu
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Abstract

This study developed and pilot tested a transdiagnostic family intervention for urban refugee families in low- and middle-income countries with limited access to evidence-based mental health services using a task-sharing approach. A family support design team designed the low-intensity family support (LIFS) model, trained facilitators and oversaw implementation. The model was piloted with 70 Syrian refugee families (n = 111 adolescents and n = 104 adults) recruited from six community-based organizations in Istanbul. Measures on mental health and psychosocial wellbeing were collected at baseline, and post-intervention at 1 month and 3 months after baseline. A mixed methods design assessed the feasibility, acceptability, and impact of the LIFS model. General psychological distress and symptoms of posttraumatic stress disorder (PTSD) decreased significantly for adults and adolescents. Among adults, attitudes regarding mental health and satisfaction with parenting significantly improved. Family comfort discussing distress mediated the intervention’s impact on psychological distress and PTSD. Qualitative findings identified benefits resulting from participation in the LIFS intervention, especially increased emotional regulation, knowledge of mental health, mental health help-seeking and family communication. Results indicated that the LIFS model was feasible, acceptable and potentially efficacious in decreasing psychological distress and PTSD in adolescent and adult urban refugees.

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Table 1. Description of the LIFS sessions in terms of content and structure

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Figure 1. Implementation and evaluation process of the LIFS Model.

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Table 2. Sociodemographic characteristics of the participants

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Table 3. Changes in symptoms and mediators for adults

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Table 4. Linear mixed-effects models for GHQ-12 and PTSD for adults and adolescents

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Table 5. Mediation effects: Family processes predicting mental health outcomes

Author comment: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR1

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Review: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The current study aims to develop and pilot a lot-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugee families in Turkey. The study adopts a mixed-methods design, following participants in the piloted intervention over three waves, and complements that with qualitative interviews with participants and facilitators. The intervention is based on Parent Management + and complements that with other low-intensity interventions. I salute the authors for the mixed-methods and longitudinal work on the ground with such a hard to reach population. I would love to see this work in print, but the manuscript needs major revisions before such important work can make a significant impact on the field.

Theoretical Rationale and Clarity of the Intervention

A key area for improvement is the theoretical foundation. The authors need to clarify what we already know about supporting refugee families and what this study adds to that knowledge. There is a growing body of literature on mental health interventions for displaced populations, but it comes with limitations (see Miller, Jordans, & Tol, 2021). How does this intervention address those gaps? What challenges does it overcome? Basing interventions in theory is crucial (see work by Miller, Jordans, & Tol, 2021), as is understanding the refugee process itself (William et al., 2010). For example, the authors describe participants as being in “resettlement,” but in Turkey, they have “guest” status, meaning they are still in the displacement phase—an important distinction with specific stressors (check out literature by William et al. (e.g., 2010) and Eltanamly et al. (2022)). Work by Sim (e.g., 2018, 2020), Al-khani (e.g., 2016) and Eltanamly (e.g., 2021) could also provide valuable insights regarding the impact of war and displacement on parenting and existing interventions for Syrian refugees.

Another key issue is the rationale for choosing a Parent Management + (PM+) intervention. What specific problems were the authors aiming to address, and how do those align with the theory behind PM+? The same logic should guide the outcome measures: if the intervention targets particular mechanisms, those should be reflected in the choice of outcomes assessed.

The description of the intervention itself also needs more clarity. The authors don’t use the full PM+ program but rather tailor their own approach. That flexibility can be a strength, but only if it’s clear why certain elements were selected and how they address the identified problems. The CAFES program is mentioned but not described—what aspects were integrated, and why?

The theoretical model guiding the study needs tightening. Right now, it’s hard to follow the logical thread from the problem the intervention aims to solve to how that problem was reduced and the mechanisms driving change. The longitudinal data presents a great opportunity for mediation analysis, but the mediators tested aren’t theoretically grounded. Without a clearer theoretical rationale and a more explicit link between the intervention components and expected mechanisms of change, it’s difficult to interpret the findings.

Methodological Clarity and Presentation

The methods section needs more clarity and structure. Spelling out the research questions alongside the data analysis plan would make it easier to follow. More details on the analysis are also needed. What is the independent variable in the study? Since there’s no control group, the IV cannot simply be “intervention.” Is it the measurement at wave 1? This needs to be explicitly stated.

For the qualitative findings, I expected the results to be grouped based on participants’ involvement in the program—especially since purposeful sampling was used to recruit those who completed the program, attended partially, or intended to join but didn’t. This choice suggests an opportunity to compare experiences across these groups, yet the research questions for the qualitative part don’t fully reflect this. Clarifying this aspect would add depth to the findings.

The tables, in their current format, are not very informative. It would be more helpful to include a table showing correlations, means, ranges, and standard deviations of all study variables. The models also need better description, particularly given that data is nested within participants. How was that accounted for? Were random effects modeled alongside fixed effects? If so, what were they, and what do they mean? Clarity on the statistical approach—such as which software was used—would also help.

Additionally, separating descriptive models (which characterize the sample at wave 1) from longitudinal models (which examine change over time) could make the findings easier to interpret. Did the authors control for any variables? If so, why, and if not, why not? Was multiple testing accounted for, and what significance level was used? Exact beta values are missing and should be reported. Linear mixed models allow for modeling both intercept and slope—could the authors clarify how they handled this in their reporting? Table 5, in particular, is confusing and needs a clearer presentation.

The absence of a control group is a limitation, and while the authors acknowledge this, they don’t fully reflect on its implications for the findings. How does this limitation affect the interpretation of the results? Addressing this explicitly would strengthen the discussion.

Language and APA

The manuscript is not currently formatted according to APA guidelines. Some terms could also be revised to avoid stigmatization—for example, using “mental health problems” instead of “disorders.” Lastly, Figure 1 is referenced in the text but is missing from the manuscript.

The manuscript would also benefit from language support. There are numerous linguistic errors that make reading a bit difficult and sentence structure needs to be improved. A proofread by a native English speaker, or professional editing, would help. Additionally, avoiding abbreviations would improve readability.

This study has the potential to make a real impact. The topic is important, the approach is valuable, and the work being done on the ground is commendable. But to truly maximize its contribution, a few key aspects need to be refined. A stronger connection between the problem, the intervention, and the mechanisms driving change—anchored in existing literature—will give the study a clearer foundation. At the same time, sharpening the methods section, ensuring statistical rigor, and improving readability will help clarify the findings.

Review: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Dear Author,

The manuscript “Developing and Piloting a Low-Intensity Family Support Intervention for Syrian Refugees” is an important contribution to the field of global mental health. It addresses the pressing need for scalable, culturally adapted mental health interventions for displaced populations, particularly in low- and middle-income country (LMIC) settings. The intervention is well-conceived, methodologically sound, and demonstrates promising initial results. Below are my comments for improving the manuscript.

Introduction

The introduction provides a comprehensive background on the mental health challenges facing Syrian refugees in Turkey and highlights the lack of family-based interventions. However, it would benefit from a more explicit articulation of the research gap earlier in the section. You might consider briefly clarifying the theoretical rationale for combining a transdiagnostic CBT-based approach (PM+) with a family-systems-based model (CAFES).

Results

The quantitative findings are clearly presented and support the conclusion that LIFS is both feasible and potentially effective. However, some scale interpretations are unclear. For instance, the parental satisfaction score reportedly improves with decreasing values—this may require clarification, as it contradicts standard scoring interpretation. Moreover, while the linear mixed models are appropriate, it may help to provide confidence intervals or effect sizes in addition to p-values.

Discussion

Suggestions for enhancement:

• Provide a more in-depth analysis of how the intervention might be adapted for other LMIC contexts or displaced populations.

• Expand on the practical implications of task-shifting to community workers, particularly in regard to sustainability and scale-up.

Limitations

Consider adding a paragraph to emphasize how future trials could address these limitations, such as through randomized controlled designs or longitudinal follow-up beyond three months.

Review: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR4

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

This manuscript presents the development and pre-post piloting of a family intervention for Syrian refugees in Türkiye. The development process involved a range of stakeholders and drew from multiple existing programmes. Both qualitative and quantitative data were collected to answer questions on feasibility, acceptability, effects, and perceptions of the programme. Given the vast mental health needs among conflict-affected populations, and the importance of family-level factors on mental health, this is a potentially important intervention and study. However there are several methodological points that should be addressed. Further, there is a need to discuss the findings of this small pilot study in relation to other studies of MHPSS interventions in similar populations, and discuss how it is envisaged that the intervention may be implemented through existing systems after the research concludes. More specific points are listed below.

Introduction

- Check on appropriate spelling of Turkey/ Türkiye

- A comment on the mental health system in Türkiye is important to put this non-specialist intervention into context

- Problem Management Plus- there is also an RCT of this intervention with Syrian refugees in Jordan, which is relevant to cite. https://journals.plos.org/plosmedicine/article?id=10.1371/journal.pmed.1003949

- It would be helpful to incorporate some discussion of other family-based approaches that have been trialled with refugee populations, including prevention/promotion approaches, and treatment approaches. Examples include work by International Rescue Committee in Thailand, Theresa Betancourt in the USA, UNODC in several locations, and War Child in Jordan.

- More details of the ‘current research with Syrians’ would help strengthen the introduction and provide the background to this study.

Methods

- A design section is needed which concisely outlines the type of study, timepoints, and approach.

- A figure illustrating the process may help readers to follow the steps of the study, especially to place the ‘months’ mentioned in text into a clearer overview.

- It would be helpful to provide an overview of the content of PM+ and CAFES interventions, since the current intervention builds from them.

- Was it a requirement for participation in the FSDT to speak English? If not, how were discussions facilitated? How does the FSDT differ from the study team/ co-author team?

- It is unclear whether the intervention is designed to be ‘treatment’ or ‘prevention’. At times in the manuscript, it is referred to as prevention, while primary outcomes focus on reducing symptomatology. Clarity of the aims of the intervention, and how this links to outcomes measured is important.

- Recruitment- given an increasing focus on father engagement in parenting and family support, what was the approach taken during recruitment in terms of identifying which family members should attend? For large families, what was the guidance on how many members should attend?

- Safety- Were any safeguards in place for assessing situations of family violence, severe mental health concerns, other protection risks? Were adverse events monitored?

- Who conducted the training and supervision?

- Facilitators completed pre-post assessments- need to mention potential bias this could introduce, and what training facilitators received on data collection. More information about how data collection was carried out is also needed- e.g. were individual family members interviewed alone with privacy?

- Outcome measures- more information is needed on how they were selected, translation of items and response options, and any contextualisation made to ensure that these were relevant to assessing these concepts within the culture/context of the study. Prior use of measures within similar populations should be explained, and psychometrics presented.

- Please outline what the GHQ measures and how it is being conceptualised in this study as ‘emotional distress’.

- Mediation analyses- more information is needed in terms of what the IVs and mediators were, and which timepoints were used for each.

- Qualitative interviews- to what extent might the family format have prevented eliciting opposing views from different family members about the intervention?

- What were the aims of the family interviews, what questions were asked, how was the guide developed? Who conducted the interview and how were they trained?

- Further details are needed regarding ‘the team’ that analysed qualitative interviews- did this include the community members in the intervention development team, or was it external academics? How were findings validated or checked with participants?

- Page 11, line 24 – it is mentioned that there are 2 post intervention timepoints (3 and 6 months), yet earlier in the methods, and in results, only immediately post intervention and 3 months post are outlined.

Results

- Engagement and retention- please report how many family members attended each session- i.e. number of caregivers and adolescents.

- Please also report how many families were approached in order to attain the current sample? Without this, engagement is not actually known.

- “with wave 3 being the baseline”- is not clear. In methods, Wave 3 is referred to as 3 months post intervention

- Reporting of effect sizes is important in order to indicate the magnitude of changes

- Pg 14, line 22- how did adolescents report on parenting satisfaction?

- Pg 14, line 24- ‘borderline significant’ – it would be better to a-priori state what p values you are considering significant and report according to this.

- Correlations- why are these only reported for adults? Additionally, the rationale for this analysis is not clearly presented in the paper.

- Mediation analysis- please outline the relationship a bit more clearly. So the reduction/increase in X over [time frame] is mediated by a reduction/increase in X over [time frame]. Does the model computed allow you to provide a % of the effect that is moderated?

- Table 3- please present standard deviations for each time-point not just the Means. Please define the asterixs, I assume they relate to significance, but it is not clear what this refers to.

- Table 4- the outcomes and timepoints presented in this table do not capture all the regression models reported on in the text.

- Table 5 presenting mediation analyses is very difficult to interpret, this needs to be presented much more clearly to ensure that the precise mediation findings are clear.

- Qualitative results- it would be helpful to outline whether these were the themes that arose from the inductive analysis, or were these subsections chosen based on the research questions?

Discussion

- Page 20: “Future family interventions should consider incorporating: even more activities for adolescents; flexible scheduling for parents who work long working hours, and; addressing more real-life problems of adolescents, such as bullying.” Please specify where these conclusions are drawn from

- Limitations also include: lack of blind assessors, lack of validation of outcome measures in this context, lack of participant validation of findings

- Please place the findings in the context of real world implementation- how might such a model be implemented in this context or others in an ongoing way? How would it link to other services? How would training and supervision be ensured?

- How do your findings relate to other studies of whole-family interventions in refugee populations and/or LMICs? How do they related to broader MHPSS intervention literature in general?

Recommendation: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR5

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Decision: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R0/PR6

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Author comment: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R1/PR7

Comments

Dr. Judith Bass

Editor-in-Chief

Cambridge Prisms: Global Mental Health

Dear Dr. Bass, June 6, 2025

We sincerely thank the reviewers for their thoughtful, detailed, and constructive feedback on our manuscript, “Developing and Piloting a Low-Intensity Family Support Intervention for Syrian Refugees.” We are grateful for the recognition of the importance of the topic and the potential contribution of this work to the field of global mental health and psychosocial support for displaced populations.

We have carefully addressed each of the reviewers’ comments and made substantial revisions to improve the manuscript’s clarity, coherence, and methodological rigor. All comments have been taken seriously, and changes have been made throughout the manuscript to address the specific points raised. These include clarifying the theoretical rationale, expanding on methodological procedures, enhancing the presentation of results (including effect sizes and standard deviations), strengthening the discussion of implications and limitations, and revising the manuscript for clarity and adherence to APA formatting.

For ease of reference, we have provided a point-by-point response below, indicating how each comment has been addressed, along with section references to the revised manuscript.

We hope that the revised version meets the expectations of the reviewers and the journal. We thank you again for your time, effort, and valuable insights, which helped improve the quality of our work.

Sincerely,

Stevan Weine M.D.

Review: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R1/PR8

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Thank you to the authors for revising the manuscript. The study demonstrates potential for making an important contribution to the global literature on mental health interventions for refugee populations. There are some remaining concerns regarding the clarity of methods and findings that should be addressed, these are listed below.

METHODS

• Safety- Were any safeguards in place for assessing situations of family violence, severe mental health concerns, other protection risks? Were adverse events monitored?

Response: Facilitators participated in weekly supervision meetings with Dr. Gormez, which

served as a key mechanism for monitoring the implementation of the intervention and addressing

any issues raised during delivery, including those related to participant safety, such as family

violence, severe mental health concerns, and other protection risks. Only in a few instances did

the facilitators provide the contact information of psychiatrists to adults who requested it. No

other safety issues of the types mentioned by the reviewer were observed during the intervention

period. We have revised the manuscript to include an additional statement in the “Training and

Supervision of the LIFS Facilitators” section (page 11), noting that regular weekly meetings with

Dr. Gormez were conducted to review the implementation process, including monitoring of any

potential safety concerns.

REVIEWER REPLY: I don’t see mention of reviewing safety concerns in the manuscript. Please outline procedures that were in place to monitor for adverse events and respond to them.

• Who conducted the training and supervision?

Response: Thank you for your comments. Dr. Gormez provided the supervision, and we have now pointed this out in the revised version of the article.

REVIEWER REPLY: Beyond the name of the author, please add information about their own training, qualifications, and background, as this has implications for replicability and scalability of the model.

• Facilitators completed pre-post assessments- need to mention potential bias this could introduce, and what training facilitators received on data collection. More information about how data collection was carried out is also needed- e.g. were individual family members interviewed alone with privacy?

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have added additional clarification to the section of Survey Assessments as follows: ”Facilitators previously were trained on confidentiality, standardized data collection, including mock exercises aiming to minimize bias and ensure consistent data gathering. The majority of assessments were conducted individually and in private; in cases where they were conducted in the same space, it was ensured that each participant felt safe and others did not overhear their responses. As mentioned earlier, weekly supervision meetings ensured both fidelity and reduction of potential bias to the process.”

REVIEWER REPLY: Regardless of training, having intervention facilitators complete post-intervention assessments is necessarily risking bias in responses from participants. Lack of independent assessors should be mentioned as a limitation- currently in the discussion there is only brief mention of ‘lack of blind assessors’, but this should be expanded with clear explanation of what this means in interpreting the findings, and recommendations to have independent blind assessors completing assessments.

• Outcome measures- more information is needed on how they were selected, translation of items and response options, and any contextualization made to ensure that these were relevant to assessing these concepts within the culture/context of the study. Prior use of measures within similar populations should be explained, and psychometrics presented.

Response: We have added further detail for each outcome measure (page 12-14), including

references to prior use and psychometric properties of the Arabic versions. Additionally, we

clarified the translation and back-translation process, describing how items and response options were refined. Additionally, we added examples of items to provide more contextualization to the

reader on specific measures such as parenting, attitudes, and openness on talking about mental

health.

REVIEWER REPLY:

Please revise measure section.

it is not clear whether the Cronbach’s alpha refers to your sample, or a published sample. Inconsistent formatting and content is provided for each measure. Ensure all acronyms spelt out first time used. It is not sure which measures are referred to in this statement "The remaining instruments underwent a translation and adaptation processes, including forward and back

translation by bilingual team members, this was followed by discussion among two translators who resolved a few discrepancies. All measures were priorly piloted with Syrian refugee adults (5) and children (5) to ensure that items are understood and clear."

• Please outline what the GHQ measures and how it is being conceptualized in this study as ‘emotional distress’.

Response: The GHQ measures psychological distress (not emotional distress) and is widely used as a screening tool to detect common mental disorders such as depression and anxiety. To reflect this, we decided to replace ‘emotional distress’ with ‘psychological distress’ throughout the paper.

REVIEWER REPLY: This needs to be outlined in the paper. Currently there is only mention of “GHQ 12” with no explanation of the tool. In results section it seems to be interpreted as depression and anxiety specifically.

• Mediation analyses - more information is needed regarding the independent variables (IVs) and mediators used, as well as the specific time points employed for each.

Response: For the mediation analysis, we used all three time points. The dependent variables

were either GHQ-12 or PTSD. Our independent variable is time or WAVE. Our mediators

encompass attitudes regarding mental health, family comfort, discussing distress, parenting

satisfaction, and help-seeking behavior. The analysis was conducted with SAS PROC MIXED

(version 9.4). We hypothesized that LIFS participants would report changes in mediators, and

that these would explain improvements in CMD symptoms (GHQ-12 and PTSD). This is

represented in Table 5.

REVIEWER REPLY: Please outline this in text as it is not clear. In addition, please state the timeframes in question. Is the hypothesis that improvements in the mediator between time 1 and 2 will explain improvements in outcome measures at Time 3? Table 5 is still not clear to me and further work should be done to ensure readers can easily interpret the findings presented.

• Further details are needed regarding ‘the team’ that analyzed qualitative interviews- did this include the community members in the intervention development team, or was it external academics? How were findings validated or checked with participants?

Response: We have added clarification that the qualitative analysis was primarily conducted by

the first and second authors (page 16). Additionally, we included an explanation that no formal validation (member-checking) with participants was conducted, aside from summarizing key

themes at the end of each interview to allow participants the opportunity to clarify or expand on

their responses (page 26).

REVIEWER REPLY: It is important to provide background on who they were and their role in the study.

RESULTS

• Engagement and retention- please report how many family members attended each session- i.e. number of caregivers and adolescents.

Response: Unfortunately, we do not have the data on the number of adolescents who attended each session. However, all caregivers brought one or more adolescents to each meeting. In the manuscript, we reported on the attendance patterns of caregivers including fathers.

REVIEWER REPLY: Please add this information about at least one adolescent attending each session to the manuscript.

• Please also report how many families were approached in order to attain the current sample? Without this, engagement is not actually known.

Response: We do not have the exact number of families who were approached by our recruiters and told about the study. However, our strong recollection is that only a handful of the families approached declined participation. We defined engagement differently from what is suggested here by the reviewer, but consistently with the literature on family interventions. Engagement is defined as the act of a family agreeing to come, they attend and participate.

REVIEWER REPLY: Without knowing how many families were invited to come, ‘engagement’ cannot be known. In your definition, ‘the act of family agreeing to come’, can only be known if you know how many did agree versus did not agree to come? Please reframe this accordingly in both results and discussion. In the discussion you highlight the high rates of uptake as a strength, but as noted, there is no data to support this.

“with wave 3 being the baseline”- is not clear. In methods, Wave 3 is referred to as 3 months

post intervention

Response: We inadvertently used the word “baseline” which created the confusion rather than

the phrase“ reference point”. Measurements were taken on three occasions, and the baseline

should be reserved for the first one. The correction is made in the text so the baseline

measurement is distinct from the last measurement we take as a reference point.

REVIEWER REPLY: It is not clear why the 3 month follow up point would be the reference point, since usually the baseline measurement would be the reference point, and the research question would be whether values changed from baseline to post-intervention, and were retained at the follow up time point. Please make sure this is clear to readers.

• Reporting of effect sizes is important to indicate the magnitude of changes

Response: We believe the reviewer is asking for reporting of betas, which would indicate the magnitude of the effect. In Table 4, betas were reported, but not in Table 5. We have modified Table 5 to include a column with betas.

REVIEWER REPLY: Please report the magnitude of effects noted in your sample in results and discussion. Without mention of effect sizes, it is not clear whether statistical significant changes on measures are meaningful.

• Pg 14, line 22- how did adolescents report on parenting satisfaction?

Response: Adolescents were not asked to report on their satisfaction with parenting. The Kansas Parenting Satisfaction scale is used to assess parents' perspectives, not the children’s.

REVIEWER REPLY: In the results section referenced in original comment, you report: “Among adolescents, linear mixed-effects models with the fixed effect of time of

measurement were significant for attitudes regarding mental health (p<.0003 at Wave 1 with

Wave 3 the baseline reference point) and parenting satisfaction (p<.0001 at Wave 1 and Wave 2,

with Wave 3 the baseline reference point), and borderline significant for help-seeking (p<.0776 at

Wave 2, with Wave 3 the baseline reference point).”

• Pg 14, line 24• ‘borderline significant’ – it would be better to a-priori state what p values you are considering significant and report according to this.

Response: We followed the standard significance categorization established in the literature, where a p-value of less than 0.05 is considered significant, and 0.05 < p-value < 0.10 is considered borderline significant. Fixing the significance level (Type I error rate or alpha) at 0.05 is standard, and any p-value less than 0.05 is considered important. However, suppose the p-value is less than twice this threshold (0.10). In that case, it still means Type I error rates are fairly properly controlled, and the corresponding p-value is considered borderline significant.

REVIEWER REPLY: This convention is not universally accepted. Please state in methods what p-value you are considering significant and interpret findings in line with these.

• Correlations- why are these only reported for adults? Additionally, the rationale for this analysis is not clearly presented in the paper.

Response: In the Methods section, we added that correlations were tested as part of addressing

Research Question Three. In the revised manuscript, we have also reported on correlations for

the adolescents (page 18).

REVIEWER REPLY: Are these correlations calculated on the baseline data? The rationale and link to research questions (which refer to mediation) are still not clear to me.

• Mediation analysis- please outline the relationship a bit more clearly. So the reduction/increase in X over [time frame] is mediated by a reduction/increase in X over [time frame]. Does the model computed allow you to provide a % of the effect that is moderated?

Response: The components of the mediation analysis are described above in response to a prior reviewer comment. Unfortunately, we cannot give a precise figure for the percent change in terms of mediation. This is because doing so would require an orthogonal design with many unfeasible assumptions, given the relatively small data size in this pilot study. The purpose of this mediation analysis is to determine whether a specific mediator alters the direction and magnitude of the relationship between the predictor and outcome.

REVIEWER REPLY: Please outline in the methods (analysis section) and the results which timepoints were used to calculate mediation effects.

• Table 3- please present standard deviations for each time-point not just the Means. Please define the asterisk. I assume they relate to significance, but it is not clear what this refers to.

Response: Yes, the asterisks denote significance. We added the definitions below each table. We also added the standard deviations for each time point.

REVIEWER REPLY: Please make it clear what each number in the boxes refers to. I assume it refers to M, SD, and range. But it is not clear.

• Table 5, presenting mediation analyses is very difficult to interpret, this needs to be presented much more clearly to ensure that the precise mediation findings are clear.

Response: To improve clarity, we made several changes to Table 5. We simplified the first column to focus only on the dependent variable. We also added a column for Betas and deleted the column for direction of change. We also deleted rows with non-significant results. To assist the reader in identifying the significant results, we also expanded the paragraph on page 20, which describes the findings.

REVIEWER REPLY: Unfortunately Table 5 is still difficult to interpret and needs further clarity

DISCUSSION

• “Future family interventions should consider incorporating: even more activities for adolescents; flexible scheduling for parents who work long working hours, and; addressing more real-life problems of adolescents, such as bullying.” Please specify where these conclusions are drawn from

Response: These conclusions were drawn from the team’s implementation experience and the

qualitative interviews conducted with facilitators and adult and adolescent participants. We also

added a quote to the qualitative findings that reflects the issue of bullying (page 19).

REVIEWER REPLY: If incorporating the study team’s implementation experience in recommendations in the discussion, please outline the process for gathering this input in the methods and findings.

Recommendation: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R1/PR9

Comments

Thank you very much for your patience. Based on the reviewer’s comment we would like to invite a minor submission.

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Recommendation: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R2/PR12

Comments

Dear authors,

Thank you for the careful response to reviewers. Based on their feedback and my own evaluation of the manuscript, we are glad to accept it for publication.

Decision: Developing and piloting a low-intensity family support intervention for Syrian refugees — R2/PR13

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