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Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  13 April 2026

Lydia N. Bailey*
Affiliation:
Northern Arizona University, USA
Anita J. Antoninka
Affiliation:
Northern Arizona University, USA
Lara Kobelt
Affiliation:
Bureau of Land Management, USA
Matthew A. Bowker
Affiliation:
Northern Arizona University, USA
*
Corresponding author: Lydia N. Bailey; Email: lydianbailey@gmail.com
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Abstract

Gypsum-rich soils have unusual characteristics that make them a haven for rare and endemic species and a target for disturbance, such as mining. To restore habitat and determine best practices for native plant reestablishment, we conducted a factorial, randomized complete block experiment in disturbed areas with gypsum-rich soils in the Mojave Desert, testing the interactive effect of seeding endemic plant species, out-planting shrubs grown with or without live native soil, biocrust inoculum and psyllium husk as a soil stabilizer. Biocrust inoculation and seeding were both needed treatments to increase the abundance of native biota, increasing biocrust cover in inoculated plots 13 times more than in uninoculated plots, and there was no passive recovery of the vascular plants; however, these factors had no interactive effect after 3 years. Soil stability generally increased across all treatments through time, though soil resistance to shear stress was reduced by biocrust, and soil aggregate stability was increased by psyllium. Shrub planting was unsuccessful, with near total mortality. Both seeding and biocrust inoculation were vital to increase the cover of perennial plants and biocrust organisms. This work reinforces the need for active restoration techniques in degraded dryland ecosystems.

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Table 1. Soil properties and disturbance history at each of the 13 experimental blocks

Figure 1

Figure 1. Overview of experimental block layout, plot layout, and monitoring locations for all 13 replicate blocks. A) Block layout with an example randomization of the split plot psyllium applications shown with white overlays. Each plot was 2x2m and at least 2m apart. B) Illustration of an example plot with psyllium split plot treatments and monitoring quadrants. Grids represent the grid point-intercept monitoring area including the empty center zone to allow monitoring quadrats to pass over shrubs. Arrows indicate the location of the first chlorophyll-a collection points, with subsequent monitorings moving one cell over on each side of the quadrat. Circle indicates the location of the end-point soil stability data collection locations. C) Photo of primary monitoring methods: point intercept grids, soil aggregate stability kit, torvane, and penetrometer. Color-coded ring marks the collection location of the three soil stability metrics.

Figure 2

Table 2. Treatment combinations applied to the 10 plots within each of the 13 replicate blocks for restoration of gypsum soils in southern Nevada

Figure 3

Figure 2. Change over time of biocrust organism abundance as measured by concentration of chlorophyll-a in the soil, a proxy for biomass, and the percent of potential habitat occupied by biocrust organisms measured with point intercept frames. We found that biocrust inoculation increased biocrust abundance in restoration sites after two and a half years. Chlorophyll-a was most increased by the combination of biocrust inoculation and shrub planting despite the highly mortality of shrubs, potentially by creating microtopography. While there was natural recovery of early successional communities such as cyanobacteria as measured with chlorophyll-a, the late successional community of primarily lichens did not recover without biocrust inoculation.

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Figure 3. The seeds of two endemic plant species, Arctomecon californica and Enceliopsis argophylla, were applied at 13 replicate blocks in gypsum soils of the Mojave Desert. Within each block, four plots were unseeded, four were seeded in 2018, and two were seeded in 2019 as part of a factorial treatment matrix (see Table 2 for plot treatment details). There was no unassisted recovery of the gypsum endemic plant community within unseeded plots after two and a half years. Seeding in year one resulted in seedlings of at least one target species in 18-28% of plots. Seeding in year two had lower success, with ~8% of treated plots containing seedlings.

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Author comment: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R0/PR1

Comments

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

I am writing to submit our manuscript “ Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave desert gypsum soil habitats” for consideration to Drylands.

Our study investigates the use of soil biota in restoration of gypsum soils to enhance soil biodiversity, soil function, and vascular plant communities. Biocrusts, the community of moss, lichen and cyanobacteria that live in the soil surface of arid lands, play a crucial role in soil stability, nutrient cycling, and hydrology. They are highly resilient to the harsh challenges of arid conditions, but vulnerable to physical disturbance. We tested the efficacy of applying biocrust propagules alongside vascular plant seeds into intensely disturbed gypsum soils in the Mojave desert to improve soil function and restore the biologic community. Though we did not find any direct interaction between biocrust and vascular plant species in the three years of our study, we did find that natural regeneration was not occurring and applying propagules is effective at increasing the cover of biocrust and native plants. Our findings not only demonstrate the efficacy of biocrust restoration but also offer practical solutions for ecosystem restoration and conservation efforts in gypsum soil environments.

We feel that our research aligns well with the aims and scopes of Drylands, as we investigate the potential interactions of soil biota on soil function and vascular plants through an applied lens. Our manuscript addresses critical gaps in current restoration practices by providing evidence-based strategies tailored to specific soil types and environmental conditions.

This is original work which is not under consideration elsewhere. We hope that our work will be of interest to your readership. We appreciate your time in considering our manuscript, and look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Lydia Bailey, Anita Antoninka, Lara Kobelt, Matthew Bowker

Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The study holds significant importance due to the limited research on gypsum soil restoration. However, major revisions are needed, particularly in the methods description, results reporting, and discussion. The experimental design is intriguing, but its schematic representation in Figure 1 is poor, hindering comprehension. Given the focus on restoration through biocrust inoculation, it would be ideal to include measurements of carbon and nitrogen. The results section contains confusing phrases, and key points are neither sufficiently explored nor effectively represented in plots. The main findings regarding biocrust establishment in inoculated sites lack a thorough discussion and do not reference critical literature adequately. Additionally, some terminologies should be revised to be more scientific. While the data analysis is exceptionally well planned and explained, the overall work needs these revisions to realize its full potential.

Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

This is a relatively straightforward applied study that assesses the effects of diverse restoration treatments, including inoculation of biocrust, seeding, or addition of psyllium, on the soil stability and biotic community of disturbed gypsum habitats.

The fieldwork and data analyses described in the manuscript have been done well and the conclusions - seeding and biocrust addition can contribute to support gypsum ecosystems in the Mojave Desert- are clear. I enjoyed reading the manuscript and only have a small number of minor suggestions for the authors to clarify some points and add more detail to help readers appreciate the study.

Introduction:

The introduction covers quite well the background needed for the research objectives and I have no comments on this section.

Methods:

In general, the methods are well explained, and tables were very helpful to understand the massive set up effort and the different treatments applied.

Line 175. It would be good to specify the total of soil samples collected.

Did you analyse any specific soil physicochemical or biological property, i.e. nutrient contents?

Line 215.

For the shrub planting treatment,seeds and rhizosphere soil were collected from the shrubs Larrea tridentata, Atriplex confertifolia, Atriplex hymenelytra, and Ambrosia Dumosa. I asume these species were selected because they are native and relevant for conservation/restoration of the area? However, I suggest adding some information about these species. Also, did you treat the seeds (to break dormancy for example)?

Lines 310 -362 (data analyses). It would be useful to list the packages used for the data analyses. I couldn’t see this in the manuscript.

Results & Discussion:

In Fig. 2, I suggest adding asterisks or similar to show significant differences across treatments. Even though chlorophyll a was higher in the biocrust inoculated + shrubs plots, there is some increase of chlorophyll a in the control plots. Would you assume this is because of the presence of photosynthetic organisms? Or a transference by wind dispersion or similar from the inoculated plots?

Line 449.

Authors state : ´Of the six A. californica which germinated, all six grew from the psyllium-treated sides of plots which is promising but too small a sample size to draw conclusions.´

I suggest this is discussed further. Have there been previous studies with similar results on similar plants?

Line 459. Authors state:´The majority of surviving shrubs, 10 of 13 as of October 2021, are concentrated in a single block.´

And:

In Line 541, ´While our shrub planting was unsuccessful overall, one block was an outlier in having a relatively high survival. As of October 2021, 50% of the shrubs in block 10 survived. This could be due to specific characteristics of this block such as bulk density, gypsum content, or landscape position but we cannot determine an exact cause with our experimental design.´

I wonder whether this is something to do with particular soil properties? It seems soil physicochemical analyses such as nutrient contents were not conducted which might also be a plausible explanation?

Conclusions

The conclusions are a bit too general; I suggest revising these to be more specific.

Recommendation: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R0/PR4

Comments

Both the two reviewers and I found the manuscript interesting and relatively novel because it focuses on gypsum soils. However, I would like to draw your attention to several doubts that I have. Reviewer #1 points out, and I agree, that, in its current form, the manuscript is difficult to understand, particularly regarding what the authors did. The experimental design is not adequately explained, making it challenging to comprehend the fieldwork conducted. Consequently, it is difficult to discern which result should be considered the main conclusion and what message the authors intend to convey. Despite these issues, I believe that this study is interesting because we have limited knowledge on the biology and ecology of gypsum soil communities, especially concerning restoration processes in this type of soils, as both reviewers say.

I strongly recommend that the authors rewrite the entire Materials and Methods section, especially focusing on the subsection that explains the experimental design. While I understand that the authors have several sites and treatments, the field experimental design must be clear for us to assess the quality of the paper. Without this, it is impossible for us to reach a conclusion about the quality of the paper. For example, it took me several readings to realize that ‘areas’ (two) refer to sites, and ‘sites’ (13) are not blocks, I am wrong? I understand that the authors have various treatments, which undoubtedly add significant relevance to the study. However, it is difficult to understand not only why these treatments were chosen but also how they were applied to the blocks, even though the authors state that they established a completely randomized block field experiment. A reader must refer to the figure and especially the table to comprehend the experimental design. If the experimental design is clearly explained, the results can be properly assessed, and the discussion will be easier to follow.

Once the authors rewrite the Materials and Methods section, they will see that the Results and Discussion sections must be rewritten accordingly, as reviewer #1 says. And they will need to redo the figures accordingly as well.

I also have several minor comments:

1. In line 69, recovery of what, plants, soil health, what?

2. In line 94, for what kind or purposes? It is explained later, but the introductory sentence of this paragraph must be rewritten.

3. In line 144, regarding the second hypothesis, I cannot understand how the authors formulated this hypothesis based on what is written in the introduction section. Could you please explain this to me?

4. I do prefer values of annual mean precipitacion in mm, not in cm.

5. I would suggest that the authors provide a bit more data about the soil properties of their two general study areas.

6. Within blocks, what are the distances among treatments? It must be explianed in the text.

7. The biocrusts that you collected were used as inocula in all your blocks? Please, explain.

8. It is difficult to understand the differences between seeding and shrub treatments. Authors need to make en effort to better explain what they did and how they did it.

9. In line 311 is “Data analysis”.

10. Although different response variables with different distributions are analyzed by authors in this paper, I would like to know if they tested for over- or underfitting zeros in the outcome, just in case for avoiding problems with the model assumptions.

11. I recommend authors to think as a policy-maker when writing the conclusion section. I agree with reviewer #2, this section is too general and does not include the main conclusion of the work.

Decision: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R0/PR5

Comments

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Author comment: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R1/PR6

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Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R1/PR7

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Dear Authors,

I would like to commend you on your revised manuscript, which I believe is a valuable contribution to the field of ecological restoration. Restoration and inoculation studies, particularly in gypsum soils, are globally scarce and require immense effort, logistics, and time to implement. Your work stands out as an important step toward advancing our understanding and methodologies in this challenging domain.

The revised version has shown significant improvement. The updated figures and illustrations have greatly enhanced the interpretation of the methodology, while the additional details and corrections have increased the clarity and rigor of the manuscript. However, I believe there are still aspects that need refinement before it can be considered for publication.

General Comments

The Materials and Methods section requires further elaboration, with specific details about experimental design, terminology clarification, and methodological consistency.

The Results section, while detailed in parts, needs improvement in maintaining uniformity across all data points and avoiding vague statements. This will enhance clarity and comprehension for the readers.

The Discussion needs further development to integrate the results more explicitly, propose hypotheses, and explore the implications of the findings more comprehensively.

Below, I outline specific feedback for your consideration, which I believe will improve the coherence, comprehensibility, and impact of your work:

Detailed Suggestions

Materials and Methods

L114-116: I suggest incorporating the location data with GPS coordinates to provide precise spatial context for the study

L119: What do you mean by ‘block’? I believe there may be an issue with using this term, as it creates confusion in interpreting and reading the methodology. If ‘block’ is indeed the correct term, what is the distance between blocks? Is the area the same across all blocks? Why is the distribution of blocks heterogeneous across the two sites.

L121: What do you mean by severe disturbances? How do you classify these disturbances? What intensity level do you use for this classification?

L127: What is the exact distance of the spacing between the five locations?

L131: What do you mean by disturbance? What exactly do you mean when you say ‘before the disturbance’? I don’t understand what you are trying to convey. Did you disturb the plots yourselves? If so, how were they disturbed.

L131: Now the term ‘plot’ appears, but it was not mentioned before. What does it refer to? What is a plot? How are they distributed? I am trying to interpret that these plots are located within the blocks, but I don’t fully understand. I find it confusing.

Experimental Design

L140: The methodology should be reorganized. If blocks and plots are mentioned at the beginning, their distribution, sizes, and other relevant details should be explained at the start. Otherwise, the reading becomes confusing, and the interpretation loses clarity.

L148: How did you ensure that psyllium did not spread to the other half of the plot? Is it a localized stabilizer that does not disperse or contaminate the other treatment?

Materials

L161: Was this biocrust identified beforehand? What are its main components? Which functional groups were dominant? Which species were present, and what is the proportion of each? Is there any information available on this?

L164: How was it mixed and homogenized?

L165: How many days after collection was the biocrust applied? Was it stored for a period before application?

L167: How was the inoculation performed? Was it sprinkled and then spread? Was it placed in a mound and then dispersed? Was it applied in a spray-like manner? If so, at what height?

Plot Preparation and installation

L220: It is not explained if the 5 cm depth reached with the rakes serves a specific purpose (e.g., improving water infiltration or increasing treatment adhesion)

L221: Rocks greater than two fists size‘: This term is imprecise, as the size of ’two fists' can vary significantly between individuals. It would be better to provide an exact measurement in centimeters or inches.

L224: t is not detailed whether measures were taken to prevent cross-contamination between treatments (e.g., wind potentially spreading seeds or biocrust material between adjacent plots).

L227: Although the watering process is described, it would be important to specify whether potable water, well water, or another type of water resource was used

L239: What do you mean by ‘quadrat’? I recall the mention of blocks and plots, but not quadrats.

L242: There is no justification for the specific sampling dates or the intervals between them. This could be important in an ecosystem with marked seasonal variations

L246-247: The phrase ‘we counted any plant rooted within the quadrat, regardless of its apparent health status’ is ambiguous. It does not specify how poorly conditioned plants were classified or whether exclusion criteria were applied.

Results

L305: In the methodology, it is mentioned that three readings were taken per plot, but it is not specified how these were averaged or analyzed. This is not addressed in the results section

L307-308: This explanation should be included in the discussion section, not in this part.

L341: In some parts, the data is highly detailed (e.g., percentage changes), while in others, it is presented in a general manner (e.g., ‘non-seeded plots showed almost no recruitment’). It is important to maintain a consistent level of detail. Additionally, the specific exotic or native species found in the plant community are not explicitly mentioned. This information would be key to evaluating the success of the restoration.

L354-355: Avoid vague statements such as “promising, but too small to draw conclusions.” Propose how future experiments could address sample size limitations.

Discussion

Directly link each discussion subsection to the specific data presented in the results. While the main findings are mentioned, they are not always explicitly linked to the data presented in the results section. For instance, discuss how chlorophyll-a and soil stability metrics could translate into functional improvements in the ecosystem. The results indicated significant interactions between biocrusts, psyllium, and shrubs, but these are not thoroughly discussed. Why did biocrusts reduce soil stability? What underlying mechanisms could explain these interactions? Include hypotheses about why biocrusts reduced soil stability or why psyllium improved the germination of certain species. Additionally, there is no evaluation of how biocrusts and plant communities might evolve beyond the three-year study period. These hypotheses could serve as a foundation for future research. Explore more thoroughly how the findings align or differ from other studies in similar contexts. This could help identify unique factors affecting the Mojave. Discuss how the results might change over the long term. For example, will biocrusts continue to expand or stabilize over time? Suggest specific strategies to improve outcomes in future studies, such as methods to enhance shrub survival or alternative seeding techniques.

Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R1/PR8

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

I think that the authors have adequately addressed all the edits and comments in this revised version of the manuscript.

Recommendation: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R1/PR9

Comments

**Handling editor**

I would like to congratulate the authors for doing an extraordinary job, which has substantially improved the quality of the manuscript. Reviewer #2 shares my opinion. A new reviewer (#3), also with the same opinion, highlights that “this work is a valuable contribution to the field of ecological restoration, particularly in gypsum soils.” I also agree with this assessment. But at the same time, after carefully reading the manuscript, I believe that the manuscript requires further refinement before it can be accepted for publication (see details below), and the new reviewer #3 also supports this opinion.

As the authors will realize after reading this letter, the main issue remains the description of the experimental design, and the new reviewer points this out (please, see details below). And also, a more uniformity and continuity in the text to improve the reading of the manuscript are desired. Although I still consider explaining such a complex experimental design to be a challenging task, after rereading the manuscript, I have identified some issues with this description. For example, as reviewer #3 says, there is a problem in understanding the difference between quadrat and plot. I suppose that quadrat is the smaller unit from which authors obtain a measurement, and that there are four quadrats per plot, right? If this is the case, please clearly explain this difference when describing the experimental design. At the same time, authors use both quadrat and quadrant indistinctively all along the text, and this adds some uncertainties that do not help in understanding the experimental design. Also in the Table 2, I suppose that “Treatment combination” is “Plot”, right? If I understood, you have 2 sites, 13 blocks, 10 plots per blocks and 4 quadrats per plot. It is important to clarify all this because we do need to know the exact number of independent measurements that you took. I suppose that n varies depending on the response variable that you are working with because of the split-plot design, but we need as many details as possible, as pointed by the reviewer #2. Authors must provide all this information (for example, n) in the appendix, along with the tables.

This is really a complex experimental design, and authors demonstrate to have great skills to analyze data. Authors have correctly fitted mixed models, appropriately including random effects to nest plots within blocks. But after carefully reviewing the appendix, I have a question: why authors did include time both as a fixed term and a random term when fitting chl-a data? I understand that only very interested readers will consult the tables included in the appendix. But I have a suggestion to improve the digestibility of the appendix: clearly separate, please, the tables showing the coefficients of the linear models, which are usually only consulted by people with a strong interest, from the tables showing the predicted/fitted values by the models, i.e., the means. This separation of tables is now partially seen for each response variable, but it is difficult to find a thread that guides the reader through the file. And in the tables, it would be great to have the number of independent measurements used to fit the models (authors can include this information in the table headers, for example, I mean n values). Perhaps authors could consider including the tables showing the data that support both figures within the main text, keeping all other tables within the appendix. And one final comment, I can see tables showing fitted values for soil sheer strength and soil aggregate stability, but I am not able to find a table showing fitted values for soil penetration resistance, why? Finally, please, cite all R packages used in the main text.

Discussion and conclusion sections are easier to follow in this new version of the paper than they were, but I strongly recommend authors to carefully consider the comments provided by the referee #3 on these two sections (please, see details below). When the conclusion section is written, I still recommend authors to think as a land manager.

Finally, I understand that nutrient data are not included and are not provided, and authors perfectly explain why in the letter, but perhaps authors could consider including this explanation in the main text.

I also have some minor comments:

1. In line 17, why “unusual” and not “particular”?

2. In line 23, why “may be” and not “is”?

3. In line 26, I think is “heaven”, not “haven”.

4. To conclude the abstract section, I would recommend adding a sentence saying that the main discovery of this work reinforces what we know about the lack of ecological recovery in drylands without the use of active restoration techniques.

5. In the keywords, authors refer to biocrusts or physical crusts? Perhaps both?

6. In line 48, is perhaps “endemisms” the correct word?

7. In line 150, to increase soil…, what? Depth, stability?

8. In line 167, authors refer to surface cover? Please, specify.

9. In line 221, the term “fist” should not be used as it is not precise, as referee #3 points out.

10. What the idea is behind this sentence: “These plots we compared to year one and unseeded plots in a separate analysis”? (lines 256-257).

11. Please, change the name and number of all tables in the appendix and use these new names and numbers throughout the results section. This will make easier the reading of the text. For example in line 309, you say “None of our treatments influenced change in penetration resistance (Appx 1)”. I would rename this table, and include its name in the main text, saying “None of our treatments influenced change in penetration resistance (Table XXX, Appendix)”.

12. In line 335, is “habitat occupation” similar to “surface cover”? If yes, I would prefer the second option, not only here, but all along the text. If authors still consider using “habitat occupation”, please, explain why.

13. The idea written in lines 392-394 is extremely important in the work, because it is related to the main message, and I would suggest the authors to include it earlier, for example at the beginning of this paragraph.

14. Reference in lines 438-439 is probably “Ballesteros”, not “Miguel Ballesteros”.

15. In the conclusion section, the last paragraph (lines 514-56) looks to be disconected from the rest of the section, I would suggest to include it somehow within the other paragraph.

16. In Table 1, please write bulk density in the fourth column instead of BD.

17. In Figure 1, authors say that plots are located 2 m away from each other, but they say 1 m in the main text. These discrepancies reduce the quality of the work. Authors have here an example of the lack of uniformity highlighted by referee #3.

**Reviewer #2**

I think that the authors have adequately addressed all the edits and comments in this revised version of the manuscript.

**Reviewer #3**

Dear Authors,

I would like to commend you on your revised manuscript, which I believe is a valuable contribution to the field of ecological restoration. Restoration and inoculation studies, particularly in gypsum soils, are globally scarce and require immense effort, logistics, and time to implement. Your work stands out as an important step toward advancing our understanding and methodologies in this challenging domain.

The revised version has shown significant improvement. The updated figures and illustrations have greatly enhanced the interpretation of the methodology, while the additional details and corrections have increased the clarity and rigor of the manuscript. However, I believe there are still aspects that need refinement before it can be considered for publication.

General Comments

The Materials and Methods section requires further elaboration, with specific details about experimental design, terminology clarification, and methodological consistency.

The Results section, while detailed in parts, needs improvement in maintaining uniformity across all data points and avoiding vague statements. This will enhance clarity and comprehension for the readers.

The Discussion needs further development to integrate the results more explicitly, propose hypotheses, and explore the implications of the findings more comprehensively.

Below, I outline specific feedback for your consideration, which I believe will improve the coherence, comprehensibility, and impact of your work:

Detailed Suggestions

Materials and Methods

L114-116: I suggest incorporating the location data with GPS coordinates to provide precise spatial context for the study

L119: What do you mean by ‘block’? I believe there may be an issue with using this term, as it creates confusion in interpreting and reading the methodology. If ‘block’ is indeed the correct term, what is the distance between blocks? Is the area the same across all blocks? Why is the distribution of blocks heterogeneous across the two sites.

L121: What do you mean by severe disturbances? How do you classify these disturbances? What intensity level do you use for this classification?

L127: What is the exact distance of the spacing between the five locations?

L131: What do you mean by disturbance? What exactly do you mean when you say ‘before the disturbance’? I don’t understand what you are trying to convey. Did you disturb the plots yourselves? If so, how were they disturbed.

L131: Now the term ‘plot’ appears, but it was not mentioned before. What does it refer to? What is a plot? How are they distributed? I am trying to interpret that these plots are located within the blocks, but I don’t fully understand. I find it confusing.

Experimental Design

L140: The methodology should be reorganized. If blocks and plots are mentioned at the beginning, their distribution, sizes, and other relevant details should be explained at the start. Otherwise, the reading becomes confusing, and the interpretation loses clarity.

L148: How did you ensure that psyllium did not spread to the other half of the plot? Is it a localized stabilizer that does not disperse or contaminate the other treatment?

Materials

L161: Was this biocrust identified beforehand? What are its main components? Which functional groups were dominant? Which species were present, and what is the proportion of each? Is there any information available on this?

L164: How was it mixed and homogenized?

L165: How many days after collection was the biocrust applied? Was it stored for a period before application?

L167: How was the inoculation performed? Was it sprinkled and then spread? Was it placed in a mound and then dispersed? Was it applied in a spray-like manner? If so, at what height?

Plot Preparation and installation

L220: It is not explained if the 5 cm depth reached with the rakes serves a specific purpose (e.g., improving water infiltration or increasing treatment adhesion)

L221: Rocks greater than two fists size‘: This term is imprecise, as the size of ’two fists' can vary significantly between individuals. It would be better to provide an exact measurement in centimeters or inches.

L224: t is not detailed whether measures were taken to prevent cross-contamination between treatments (e.g., wind potentially spreading seeds or biocrust material between adjacent plots).

L227: Although the watering process is described, it would be important to specify whether potable water, well water, or another type of water resource was used

L239: What do you mean by ‘quadrat’? I recall the mention of blocks and plots, but not quadrats.

L242: There is no justification for the specific sampling dates or the intervals between them. This could be important in an ecosystem with marked seasonal variations

L246-247: The phrase ‘we counted any plant rooted within the quadrat, regardless of its apparent health status’ is ambiguous. It does not specify how poorly conditioned plants were classified or whether exclusion criteria were applied.

Results

L305: In the methodology, it is mentioned that three readings were taken per plot, but it is not specified how these were averaged or analyzed. This is not addressed in the results section

L307-308: This explanation should be included in the discussion section, not in this part.

L341: In some parts, the data is highly detailed (e.g., percentage changes), while in others, it is presented in a general manner (e.g., ‘non-seeded plots showed almost no recruitment’). It is important to maintain a consistent level of detail. Additionally, the specific exotic or native species found in the plant community are not explicitly mentioned. This information would be key to evaluating the success of the restoration.

L354-355: Avoid vague statements such as “promising, but too small to draw conclusions.” Propose how future experiments could address sample size limitations.

Discussion

Directly link each discussion subsection to the specific data presented in the results. While the main findings are mentioned, they are not always explicitly linked to the data presented in the results section. For instance, discuss how chlorophyll-a and soil stability metrics could translate into functional improvements in the ecosystem. The results indicated significant interactions between biocrusts, psyllium, and shrubs, but these are not thoroughly discussed. Why did biocrusts reduce soil stability? What underlying mechanisms could explain these interactions? Include hypotheses about why biocrusts reduced soil stability or why psyllium improved the germination of certain species. Additionally, there is no evaluation of how biocrusts and plant communities might evolve beyond the three-year study period. These hypotheses could serve as a foundation for future research. Explore more thoroughly how the findings align or differ from other studies in similar contexts. This could help identify unique factors affecting the Mojave. Discuss how the results might change over the long term. For example, will biocrusts continue to expand or stabilize over time? Suggest specific strategies to improve outcomes in future studies, such as methods to enhance shrub survival or alternative seeding techniques.

Sincerely,

Sergio Velasco Ayuso

Decision: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R1/PR10

Comments

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Author comment: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R2/PR11

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Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R2/PR12

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Comments

Great job addressing all issues raised.

Review: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R2/PR13

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Comments

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

First and foremost, I would like to congratulate you on the important and ambitious work presented in this manuscript. Overall, this study is a strong and valuable contribution to restoration ecology in gypsum systems. The experimental design is ambitious and carefully executed, and the work clearly reflects a substantial investment of time and effort under challenging field conditions. I especially appreciate the applied relevance of the findings for practitioners working under real-world constraints in disturbed desert landscapes. Publishing rigorous, field-based restoration experiments like this is essential to strengthen the evidence base for arid-land restoration and to support the development of realistic, long-term monitoring and management strategies in understudied gypsum habitats.

Thank you for the revised version. The study remains strong in its overall design and relevance to gypsum-soil restoration, and the revised analyses appear appropriate for the data structure. In this round, I have a few targeted clarification requests that would further strengthen reproducibility and interpretation without requiring substantial reworking.

Major comment – Watering / precipitation regime still not fully described

When reading the Methods, it is still unclear whether the experiment received only one watering event at installation or whether there was any supplemental watering afterward, and if so, how often. The manuscript quantifies an initial installation watering (3.8 L mist + 19 L additional; total 5.7 L m⁻²), but does not explicitly state whether any additional watering occurred thereafter, nor the watering provided to shrub outplants beyond “watering until surface pooling.” Because blocks span a precipitation gradient and germination/survival outcomes are highly moisture-sensitive, please explicitly state whether plots relied solely on ambient precipitation after installation. If supplemental watering was applied, please report timing, frequency, duration, and volume (L m⁻² and/or L per plant), and confirm it was consistent across treatments and blocks. Additionally, a brief summary of precipitation during the study years (e.g., PRISM or equivalent) would help contextualize differences between year-1 vs year-2 seeding outcomes and overall establishment patterns.

Minor comment – Shrub mortality and block-level clustering

Shrub performance appears extremely limited, and the reported clustering (e.g., a large fraction of survivors concentrated within a single block) suggests strong micro-site heterogeneity (moisture, substrate texture, exposure, herbivory, etc.). If possible, please add 2–3 interpretive lines acknowledging this pattern and offering plausible site-level drivers (or noting relevant covariates if they were recorded). This would help readers interpret shrub outcomes as potentially constrained by local microsite conditions rather than treatment effects alone.

Minor comment . Figure 3 traceability

Figure 3’s caption is clear and informative. If space allows, it would be helpful to add the effective sample size (e.g., number of blocks/plots contributing to the estimate) and/or a direct pointer to Supplementary Table S12 (or the relevant table) for traceability.

Additional minor suggestions (optional, low-effort)

• Where “nativeness” metrics can reflect either “only exotics” or “no plants detected,” a brief reminder in the Results/Discussion would help avoid misinterpretation, especially given the known constraints on detection timing.

• If available, adding one sentence on seed lot provenance/handling (storage duration, viability check if any) would strengthen reproducibility, but I view this as optional at this stage.

Overall, these are mostly clarifications that would improve reproducibility and strengthen inference, particularly regarding moisture inputs and site heterogeneity.

Recommendation: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R2/PR14

Comments

**Handling editor**

I would like to congratulate the authors. The manuscript has improved substantially. In its current form, it is almost ready for publication, in my opinion. I do not have any specific comment. Reviewer 2 considers that the manuscript can be published directly. However, reviewer 3 has made a few very minor comments that the authors should address. Specifically, reviewer 3 wants a clearer explanation of the irrigation regime (frequency, amount of water, etc.) as well as two/three sentences that explain the observed response of shrubs.

**Reviewer 2**

Great job addressing all issues raised.

**Reviewer 3**

First and foremost, I would like to congratulate you on the important and ambitious work presented in this manuscript. Overall, this study is a strong and valuable contribution to restoration ecology in gypsum systems. The experimental design is ambitious and carefully executed, and the work clearly reflects a substantial investment of time and effort under challenging field conditions. I especially appreciate the applied relevance of the findings for practitioners working under real-world constraints in disturbed desert landscapes. Publishing rigorous, field-based restoration experiments like this is essential to strengthen the evidence base for arid-land restoration and to support the development of realistic, long-term monitoring and management strategies in understudied gypsum habitats.

Thank you for the revised version. The study remains strong in its overall design and relevance to gypsum-soil restoration, and the revised analyses appear appropriate for the data structure. In this round, I have a few targeted clarification requests that would further strengthen reproducibility and interpretation without requiring substantial reworking.

Major comment – Watering / precipitation regime still not fully described

When reading the Methods, it is still unclear whether the experiment received only one watering event at installation or whether there was any supplemental watering afterward, and if so, how often. The manuscript quantifies an initial installation watering (3.8 L mist + 19 L additional; total 5.7 L m⁻²), but does not explicitly state whether any additional watering occurred thereafter, nor the watering provided to shrub outplants beyond “watering until surface pooling.” Because blocks span a precipitation gradient and germination/survival outcomes are highly moisture-sensitive, please explicitly state whether plots relied solely on ambient precipitation after installation. If supplemental watering was applied, please report timing, frequency, duration, and volume (L m⁻² and/or L per plant), and confirm it was consistent across treatments and blocks. Additionally, a brief summary of precipitation during the study years (e.g., PRISM or equivalent) would help contextualize differences between year-1 vs year-2 seeding outcomes and overall establishment patterns.

Minor comment – Shrub mortality and block-level clustering

Shrub performance appears extremely limited, and the reported clustering (e.g., a large fraction of survivors concentrated within a single block) suggests strong micro-site heterogeneity (moisture, substrate texture, exposure, herbivory, etc.). If possible, please add 2–3 interpretive lines acknowledging this pattern and offering plausible site-level drivers (or noting relevant covariates if they were recorded). This would help readers interpret shrub outcomes as potentially constrained by local microsite conditions rather than treatment effects alone.

Minor comment . Figure 3 traceability

Figure 3’s caption is clear and informative. If space allows, it would be helpful to add the effective sample size (e.g., number of blocks/plots contributing to the estimate) and/or a direct pointer to Supplementary Table S12 (or the relevant table) for traceability.

Additional minor suggestions (optional, low-effort)

• Where “nativeness” metrics can reflect either “only exotics” or “no plants detected,” a brief reminder in the Results/Discussion would help avoid misinterpretation, especially given the known constraints on detection timing.

• If available, adding one sentence on seed lot provenance/handling (storage duration, viability check if any) would strengthen reproducibility, but I view this as optional at this stage.

Overall, these are mostly clarifications that would improve reproducibility and strengthen inference, particularly regarding moisture inputs and site heterogeneity.

Once these comments are addressed and the modifications made on the manuscript, I will approve the paper for its publication in Drylands.

I would like to reiterate the excellent review work carried out by the authors. And the impressive field work that they did.

Sincerely,

Sergio Velasco Ayuso

Decision: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R2/PR15

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Author comment: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R3/PR16

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Recommendation: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R3/PR17

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After reading the manuscript, in my opinion, this manuscript is ready for publication. I congratulate the authors on their excellent work. I have only detected a typo: in line 316, a “. n” must be removed.

Sincerely,

Sergio Velasco Ayuso

Decision: Biocrust inoculation and seeding are necessary for restoration of Mojave Desert gypsum soil habitats — R3/PR18

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