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Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  16 July 2026

Ousmane Ndione
Affiliation:
Institut d’Écologie et des Sciences de l’Environnement de Paris (iEES-Paris), Sorbonne Université, IRD, CNRS, INRAE, Université Paris Est Creteil, Université Paris Cité, Paris, France
Florence Boyer
Affiliation:
IRD , France
Sougueh Cheik
Affiliation:
Centre d’Études et de Recherches de Djibouti (CERD) , Djibouti
Abdourahman Daher
Affiliation:
Centre d’Études et de Recherches de Djibouti (CERD) , Djibouti
Oumarou Malam Issa*
Affiliation:
Institut d’Écologie et des Sciences de l’Environnement de Paris (iEES-Paris), Sorbonne Université, IRD, CNRS, INRAE, Université Paris Est Creteil, Université Paris Cité, Paris, France Centre d’Études et de Recherches de Djibouti (CERD) , Djibouti French National Research Institute for Sustainable Development , France
*
Corresponding author: Oumarou Malam Issa; Email: oumarou.malamissa@ird.fr
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Sustainable land management (SLM) practices are promoted to restore degraded ecosystems in the Great Green Wall (GGW) areas, yet their large-scale adoption depends on effective engagement of rural communities. This study analyses the factors shaping adoption of SLM practices, with particular attention to gender differences and the role of women. The research was conducted in six regions of Djibouti, including four intersected by the GGW initiative. Mixed quantitative and qualitative surveys were carried out in 19 villages with 329 farmers and 21 community leaders. An adoption index based on ten SLM practices was constructed and examined across national, regional, and village scales using incremental regression modelling. Results show that adoption levels are significantly higher among men than women. Although the gender effect is strong at the national scale, it decreases at regional and village levels. Adoption is also influenced by farming systems, crop types, and perceived vulnerability to climatic hazards across all scales. At the village level, access to land and the frequency of rural migration further shape adoption patterns. Overall, the findings indicate that constraints limiting women’s engagement in SLM, access to land and labour, are evident at the national scale but vary substantially across local contexts.

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Table 1. Distribution of respondents by region, study site and genderTable 1. long description.

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Table 2. Sociodemographic characteristics of the surveyed population (N = 329)Table 2. long description.

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Table 3. Socioeconomic and agricultural characteristics of rural households (N = 329)Table 3. long description.

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Table 4. Descriptive statistics of regression variables (N = 329)Table 4. long description.

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Author comment: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R0/PR1

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Dear Editor,

We are pleased to submit the manuscript entitled “ A multiscale analysis of the gendered determinants of sustainable land management practice adoption in Great Green Wall intervention areas in Djibouti” for consideration for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

This manuscript examines the determinants of the adoption of sustainable land management (SLM) practices in dryland contexts, with a particular focus on gender dynamics across multiple spatial scales (village, regional, and national levels). Drawing on mixed quantitative and qualitative data collected in six regions of Djibouti—four of which are targeted by the Great Green Wall initiative—the study highlights how socio-economic and biophysical factors interact differently across scales to shape women’s engagement in SLM practices.

By explicitly addressing gender disparities and spatial heterogeneity, this research contributes to the literature on land management and socio-environmental systems and provides policy-relevant insights for the design of inclusive land restoration and climate adaptation strategies in dryland and developing-country contexts. We believe that the manuscript aligns well with the scope of Cambridge Prisms: Drylands, particularly its focus on sustainable land management, drylands, and applied research with implications for policy and practice.

We confirm that this manuscript is original, has not been published previously, and is not under consideration for publication elsewhere. All authors have approved the manuscript and agree with its submission to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Thank you for considering our manuscript. We would be grateful for the opportunity to have it reviewed and remain at your disposal for any further information.

Yours sincerely,

Oumarou MALAM ISSA

Senior soil scientist, IRD

oumarou.malamissa@ird.fr

Review: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

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REVIEW: DRY-2026-0005. Multiscale analysis of gendered determinants of sustainable land management practice adoption in Great Green Wall intervention areas in Djibouti

I confirm this paper, once finalised would have appeal to readers of DRYLANDS, particularly educators, academics, policymakers, funders, and ‘sustainability-employed’ practitioners. It is very useful because the topic provides new information that discusses and describes factors that could enhance uptake of sustainable land management practices. I recommend to the editors and author(s), they/we should persevere to strengthen this important paper to get it to publication stage.

Recommendation Major revision (default primarily because of reference errors/omissions)

General comments

Firstly, I find the title daunting for any potential reader who does not have a statistical/mathematical bent that may detract them from reading any further. I suggest a re-title, something along the lines of: “Factors affecting uptake of sustainable land management practice adoption in Djibouti.” Once a title is settled, then a firming up of text and answering the question/issue being posed can be clarified and strengthened.

I will now focus my review primarily on the statistical method, but firstly I feel that at a general level there needs to be care that terminology used is correct and consistent and if necessary, more clearly defined. Two recommendations therefore are: (i) a glossary of terms with definitions (not just statistical terms but also some of the SLM terminology – viz. half-moons, water management), would assist readers understand the author(s) intent with the specific jargon; and thus (ii) a re-read and correction of the paper using consistent terms. As a result, at times I found the paper to be a little too long and a little incoherent. A rigorous proof-reading to clarify and sharpen the paper would definitely be of benefit to readers. I will elaborate further on this point about terminology and then make more specific comments on the paper.

In my opinion, the terms ‘scale’ and ‘level’ seem to be used interchangeably but are in fact used in quite different contexts of statistics and measurement theory (my background). On page 2 the authors state ‘gender effect is strong at the national scale, it decreases at regional and village levels’, which seems to suggest that the terms ‘scale’ and ‘level’ are treated the same, yet they have quite different meanings and I think the authors are referring to ‘level’. Thus, it seems that the analysis is leading towards a multilevel analysis (model 3), (though I stand corrected if this is wrong), as the analysis as described now is confusing. Two useful references (Bliese, 2012; Faraway, 2006) are included below which might assist the authors if they wish to pursue multi-level analyses.

The authors use their literature review to reinforce their contention that gender is an important factor in the uptake of SLM practices. I have suggested other key references that support this context and its importance in SLM uptake. Their method commences with the design of an instrument that measures in some way the adoption of these practices. Indeed, the authors create a measure of adoption on the basis of respondents’ response to 10 dichotomously coded items. The method then involves some univariate analysis of the response variable and then the use of a series of three linear regression models to gain understanding of which variables were predictive of SLM adoption. Unfortunately, there is very little attempt to justify the reliability (e.g. internal reliability) and validity of the response variable. This is a significant defect to the study. The authors provide information regarding the respondents but little information on how they are selected and questioned. Finally, a series of regression models are presented in an attempt to, seemingly, find out more information about the interaction of gender with a number of demographic variables. The statistical analysis seems correct but the lack of a clear study focus turns it into a kind of ‘fishing’ trip. To this end I suggest that the authors:

• Provide more information on the response variable and justify its treatment (e.g. why did they use dichotomously coded responses).

• Provide a histogram showing the distribution of the response by gender, because the paper is ostensibly about gender and land management practices.

• Consider reducing the number of explanatory variables in the models to create a more focused study.

Specific comments:

1. On page 4, section 2.2.1 you state that ‘the field survey was carried out using three structured questionnaires’, but then identify just two of them. Men and women did different questionnaires. Please explain why?

2. Page 4, references for Marshall’s formula (1996) and Frey (2000) are not provided.

3. I have a problem with the construction of your index and why you chose to dichotomise the response rather than allow more options (e.g. 5 point scale). Perhaps provide some justification for this choice? Provide information supporting its reliability and validity. After all the study hangs on this.

4. Can you provide information on how the participants were recruited? Whether participation was compulsory for them and how many (if any) declined to be involved. How was the survey implemented (e.g. person interview, via the phone, combination,…how managing illiterate/innumerate individuals [if there were any included,…] etc). Also, can you provide any demographic information on the 32% of participants who were not included?

5. Was there a random element used in the choice of participants from the 68% who were in the sampling frame? How was this achieved?

6. I would like to see some bi-variate analyses that could be used to ‘build-up’ the model(s) that follow. This is attempted in Table 4, but the table needs some footnotes explaining what each of the parameters mean. For example, is Moy the mean or median? Presumably Q1 and Q3 are the first and third quartiles? What is E.-T (margin of error?)? Include this information as footnotes together with the existing one. It would make the interpretation of statements such as shown in 3.1.3 on page 8 easier to accept.

7. Could you also explain and/or include a plot showing the distribution of the response by both male and female respondents?

8. Was the data nested? That is respondents in villages, in regions? It appears to be the case, in which case a random intercepts model or indeed a random intercepts and slopes model should be used. See the references… Start by running an ANOVA partitioning the response variable between and within regions.

9. I would like to see more discussion that examines how ‘land tenure’ (as it relates to Djibouti), and adoption of SLM relate.

Key references missing

Bliese, P. (2012). Multilevel modelling in R (2.5). Columbia, SC: University of South Carolina. Available online at http://cran.r-project.org/doc/contrib/Bliese_Multilevel.pdf. Accessed 27 May 2015.

Brown, D. D., Paul & Rinaudo, Tony & Tefera, Hailu & Tofu, Assefa. (2010). Poverty Alleviation and Environmental Restoration Using the Clean Development Mechanism: A Case Study from Humbo, Ethiopia. Environmental management., 48 322-333. https://doi.org/10.1007/s00267-010-9590-3

Faraway, J. J. (2006). Extending the linear model with R. Journal of the Royal Statistical Society: Series A (Statistics in Society), 169(4), 1008.

Liniger, H.P., R. Mekdaschi Studer, C. Hauert and M. Gurtner. (2011). Sustainable Land Management in Practice – Guidelines and best Practices for Sub-Saharan Africa. TerrAfrica, World Overview of Conservation Approaches and Technologies (WOCAT) and Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations (FAO).

Recommendation: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R0/PR3

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Dear authors

My apologies that it has taken so long to get you a response. The previous handling editor had the manuscript for 47 days and could not find a suitable reviewer. I have one reviewer report and have looked at the manuscript myself and provide the following comments.

In general, I think the study is a really useful contribution to our understanding of the role of gender in the adoption of land management practises and is a good fit for Drylands. However, as indicated by the reviewer, there are some areas that need further work to make it suitable for this journal.

The title is too long and unwieldy. I suggest something like ‘Gender determinants of land management adoption in Djibouti’. I note that the reviewer also has the same response. You would get greater citations if you left out the name of the country and just used something like ‘Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland’.

Please avoid the use of three letter acronyms; they are extremely annoying and alienate the reader. For example, instead of using the term SLM, use the full words ‘sustainable land management’ or ‘sustainable management’ hereafter.

Please write in a consistent tense, generally past tense is better.

The structure of the manuscript is very messy and confusing with all of the numbering. This is not the style of the journal. Try to have fewer higher order headings and it will flow better and the reader can see where you are going. The heading should all by left justified and with no numbering. I suggest heading of Introduction, Methods (Study sites, Survey methods, Statistical analyses), Results (General results, Effects of scale on adoption, Gender inequality, adaptation and local conditions), Discussion, Conclusions.

There are two hypotheses, but the reader will want to know the basis and logic of these hypotheses. For example, why would we expect factors driving the adoption of sustainable land practises to differ depending on the scale of analysis and the context?. Similarly, why would we expect gender inequality and adaptation to be shaped by local conditions? These are critical considerations because they will drive the analyses and form the basis for the Results and Discussion. You should have a sentence or two around these.

Statistics

Statistics are important, but having reams of models does not help the flow of the document and these are just generic textbook models for multiple regression. I want to see you move the generic model forms (Models 1-8) to the Supplementary documents.

Where you refer to a model in the main text (e.g. Model 5), the standard approach is to say something like: ‘We first used multiple linear regression to test the effects of gender, marital status, …………. and migration frequency on an index of adoption of sustainable land management practices (Supplementary material S1)’. The reader does not want to see lists of textbook model structure and beta values that are generic linear model structures. The description of these models and what you did should be in a standard statistical analysis section along with the assumptions. Moving this generic statistical material to the supplementary material will make the manuscript much easier to digest and less busy.

Results

We need to see more alignment between the hypotheses and the results, particularly the headings in the Results section (see above). For example, you could have General results where you talk about the characteristics of the households, then two further subheadings something like ‘Effects of scale on the adoption’ and ‘Gender inequality, adaptation and local condition’. That way the reader can see a direct progression from the hypotheses to the Results and later to the Discussion.

Tables 5 and 6 are not particularly informative and don’t deserve a place in the main document. If you want to include them, they must go in the Supplementary material. The same goes for Figure 1, it doesn’t really tell me anything.

The References need to be formatted according to the style of the journal. Please see a recent issue of the journal.

Overall, with a little work the manuscript can make a great contribution to our understanding of gender issues in drylands. Good luck with your revisions.

David Eldridge

Decision: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R0/PR4

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Author comment: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R1/PR5

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Manuscript ID: Cambridge Prisms: Drylands - Decision on DRY-2026-0005

Title: " Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland”

Authors: Ndione O., Boyer F., Cheik S., Daher A., Malam Issa O."

30 May 2026

Dear Dr Li,

Thank you for your letter inviting us to re-submit our paper entitled “ Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland ” after major revision. We have made all the changes suggested by the reviewers and your own assessment. You will find these changes in the note below with our responses to the comments shown. The reviewers’ original comments appear in italics and our responses in blue. In addition to this revision note document, we have submitted four documents:

- The revised manuscript with track changes,

- A clean version of our article,

- An appendix,

- A list of figures tables.

We would like to thank you and the Reviewer for the constructive comments and suggestions that helped us in strengthening the paper. We believe the revised manuscript is now acceptable for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Yours sincerely,

Review: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R1/PR6

Conflict of interest statement

R1 review of “Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland.” DRY-2026-0005.R1 The paper, once minor points are addressed, will make a useful contribution to the journal. I have 3 suggestions detailed below. 1. The abstract needs some more clarification. Abstract Sustainable land management (SLM) practices are promoted to restore degraded ecosystems in the Great Green Wall (GGW) areas, yet their large-scale adoption depends on effective authentic and convincing engagement of individuals and rural communities. This study analyses the factors shaping adoption of SLM practices, with particular attention to gender differences and the role of women. The research was conducted in six regions of Djibouti, including four intersected by the GGW initiative. Mixed quantitative and qualitative surveys were carried out in 19 villages with 329 farmers and 21 community leaders. An adoption index based on ten SLM practices was constructed and examined across national, regional, and village scales using incremental regression modelling. Results show that adoption levels are significantly higher among men than women. Although the gender bias indicating a favouring of men up-taking SLM more than women is strong at the national scale, it decreases balances out more at regional and village levels. Adoption is also influenced to some degree by farming systems, crop types, and perceived vulnerability to climatic hazards across all scales. At the village level, access to land and the frequency of rural migration further shape adoption patterns. Overall, the findings indicate that constraints limiting women’s engagement in SLM, are predominantly access to land and labour, and are evident at the national scale but vary substantially across local contexts 2. In the conclusion, the author(s) must more succinctly address how the data answers the 2 hypotheses as presented on p. 7. Conclusions In our research, we found that (i) determinants of adoption of SLM does vary significantly by scale; and (ii) gender inequalities in uptake of SLM are shaped by multi-factorial influences. We therefore recommend that future SLM approaches better address both these insights to achieve greater success. 3. I have not been through every reference and citation again to cross-check they are all in order, nor they address the Cambridge A style guide. I trust this may be satisfactorily handled by the DTP team.

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R1 review of “Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland.” DRY-2026-0005.R1

The paper, once minor points are addressed, will make a useful contribution to the journal.

I have 2 suggestions detailed below.

1. The abstract needs some more clarification.

Abstract

Sustainable land management (SLM) practices are promoted to restore degraded

ecosystems in the Great Green Wall (GGW) areas, yet their large-scale adoption

depends on effective authentic and convincing engagement of individuals and rural communities. This study analyses the factors shaping adoption of SLM practices, with particular attention to gender differences and the role of women. The research was conducted in six regions of Djibouti, including four intersected by the GGW initiative. Mixed quantitative and qualitative surveys were carried out in 19 villages with 329 farmers and 21 community leaders. An adoption index based on ten SLM practices was constructed and examined across national, regional, and village scales using incremental regression modelling. Results show that adoption levels are significantly higher among men than women. Although the gender bias indicating a favouring of men up-taking SLM more than women is strong at the national scale, it decreases balances out more at regional and village levels. Adoption is also influenced to some degree by farming systems, crop types, and perceived vulnerability to climatic hazards across all scales. At the village level, access to land and the frequency of rural migration further shape adoption patterns. Overall, the findings indicate that constraints limiting women’s engagement in SLM, are predominantly access to land and labour, and are evident at the national scale but vary substantially across local contexts

2. In the conclusion, the author(s) must more succinctly address how the data answers the 2 hypotheses as presented on p. 7.

Conclusions

In our research, we found that (i) determinants of adoption of SLM does vary significantly by scale; and (ii) gender inequalities in uptake of SLM are shaped by multi-factorial influences. We therefore recommend that future SLM approaches better address both these insights to achieve greater success.

Recommendation: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R1/PR7

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Dear authors,

you have done a fantastic job addressing the concerns of the reviewers and the manuscript is substantially improved. It reads more like a rigorously constructed manuscript than it did before.

I would still like you to remove any three letter acronyms in the manuscript. I note that there are still a couple in the abstract.

The reviewer has identified some shortcomings with the abstract and has provided an alternative version, which you are free to accept or reject. But I would ask you to seriously consider some of the changes to make sure that your abstract fully articulates what you have in the main manuscript.

This is a really great story, and I look forward to seeing it published.

Decision: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R1/PR8

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Author comment: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R2/PR9

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Manuscript ID: Cambridge Prisms: Drylands - Decision on DRY-2026-0005

Title: " Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland”

Authors: Ndione O., Boyer F., Cheik S., Daher A., Malam Issa O."

16 June 2026

Dear Dr Li,

Thank you for your letter inviting us to re-submit our paper entitled “ Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland ” after minor revision. We have taken into account all the Handling Editor’s comments and check the formatting points you have raised. You will find these changes in the note below with our responses to the comments shown. The reviewers’ original comments appear in italics and our responses in blue. In addition to this revision note document, we have submitted four documents:

- The revised manuscript with track changes modifications highlighted in orange for ease of review,

- A clean version of our article,

- the table file

- An appendix with supplementary material,

- A list of figures and tables.

We would like to thank you and the Handling Editor for the constructive comments and suggestions that substantially improved the quality of our paper. We believe the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

We are at your disposal for further information.

Yours sincerely,

• The final corrected version of the manuscript;

• The revised manuscript with all modifications highlighted in orange for ease of review;

• The abstract, including the graphical abstract;

• The table files;

• The supplementary materials (appendices) associated with the manuscript.

We greatly appreciate the time and effort you have invested in reviewing our work and remain at your disposal should any further clarification be required.

Sincerely,

Mr. Ousmane NDIONE,

Prof. Oumarou Malam Issa

Recommendation: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R2/PR10

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Great work, I am excited about seeing this published in the journal. Best wishes David

Decision: Gender determinants of land management adoption in an east African dryland — R2/PR11

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