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When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  15 October 2026

Tania Bosqui*
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, American University of Beirut , Lebanon Trinity Centre for Global Health, Trinity College Dublin, Ireland School of Education, University College Dublin , Dublin, Ireland
Salam Jabbour
Affiliation:
Trinity Centre for Global Health, Trinity College Dublin, Ireland
Zeena Hashem
Affiliation:
ACT Center KSA, Jeddah, Saudi Arabia
Lily Terrasson Honeysett
Affiliation:
Trinity Centre for Global Health, Trinity College Dublin, Ireland
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Corresponding author: Tania Bosqui; Email: tb33@aub.edu.lb
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Abstract

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Mental health interventions in humanitarian settings are informed by existing evidence-based cognitive behavioral interventions and the theoretical frameworks they are based on. This includes key assumptions that trauma exposure is in the past and that the perception of current threat is distorted. While these interventions have some evidence of effectiveness in affected populations, they have been widely criticized for lacking contextual relevance and medicalizing the suffering of people facing ongoing violence, injustice and oppression. We aimed to address this by reviewing the evidence for the core theoretical mechanisms of post-traumatic stress based on the widely used Ehlers and Clark (2000) cognitive model, specifically in the context of war, armed conflict and political violence. We conducted a systematic review with four searches on the core components of the model, using three academic databases. We identified 69 primary studies, which were narratively synthesized by mechanism, research design and age group. Results showed strong evidence for the role of cognitive appraisals, especially for adults, in the development and maintenance of distress. Mixed evidence was identified for emotions, with a role of shame, guilt and fear in traumatic stress, but also broader collective suffering and prolonged terror. Mixed evidence was also found for the role of memory in traumatic stress, with good evidence for a link between multiple and fragmented memories and traumatic stress, but also for higher autobiographical recall. Further mixed evidence was found for behavioral coping strategies, with avoidant coping associated with traumatic stress in some studies but not others. Current exposure was found to have different mechanisms than post-exposure, such as the negative impact of psychological flexibility and social support on mental health in some contexts, and the benefit of appetitive aggression for the mental health of child combatants. Additional mechanisms were identified related to family functioning, social cohesion and socio-political and economic injustice. An adapted socio-cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress for adults and children is proposed, with implications for future research on distinct mechanisms of the model, and greater contextual relevance of humanitarian mental health interventions delivered during war.

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Figure 1. The Ehlers and Clark (2000) cognitive model of persistent PTSD.Figure 1. long description.

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Figure 2. The socio-interpersonal model of traumatic stress (Maercker and Horn, 2013).Figure 2. long description.

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Table 1. Mechanisms grouped by review numberTable 1. long description.

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Figure 3. PRISMA flowchart.Figure 3. long description.

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Table 2. Characteristics of included studies for cognitive appraisal of the trauma event and/or its sequelae, and cognitive processing during traumaTable 2. long description.

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Table 3. Characteristics of included studies for appraisals and emotional responsesTable 3. long description.

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Table 4. Characteristics of included studies for the nature of the memory and the relationships with appraisalsTable 4. long description.

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Table 5. Characteristics of included studies for maladaptive behavioral strategies and cognitive processing stylesTable 5. long description.

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Table 6. Quality of evidence for the existing cognitive model for persistent PTSD (Ehlers and Clark, 2000) in a) adults and b) children and adolescentsTable 6. long description.

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Figure 4. Socio-cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress in the context of war, armed conflict and political violence.Figure 4. long description.

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Author comment: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR1

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Dear Editors,

I am enclosing a new manuscript entitled “When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict, and political violence” for consideration for publication in Global Mental Health.

This is the first review of its kind to test the cognitive model of post-traumatic stress in humanitarian settings, and proposes an adapted model for ‘continous traumatic stress.’ The paper has implications for informing interventions in protracted conflicts and displacement contexts.

The enclosed manuscript has not been published previously and is not under consideration for publication elsewhere. The authors declared no potential conflicts of interest with respect to the research, authorship, and publication of this article.

Many thanks for considering our paper. We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Tania Bosqui

On behalf of all the authors

Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors of the presented manuscript propose an interesting and well-elaborated model of continuous traumatic stress (CTS), which is highly relevant in the current global situation, where numerous countries and millions of people continue to live under CTS conditions with profound negative consequences for both mental and physical health. As the authors rightly note, a more comprehensive understanding of CTS may accelerate the development of appropriate and timely clinical interventions in contexts where the traditional PTSD paradigm does not suit optimally.

Thus, the proposed model is of significant interest to both scientific and practitioner communities. However, before it can be accepted for publication, the manuscript requires major revisions, as it contains various inconsistencies and contradictions that undermine the coherence and validity of the proposed model.

Major concerns:

1. Page 4, lines 6–7: “The allocation of mechanisms to review are outlined in Table 1.” It is crucial to provide sufficient rationale for the selected mechanisms, based on Ehlers and Clark’s model of traumatic stress. This would strengthen the coherence of the text and explain why specific mechanisms were chosen for analysis. The connection between Ehlers and Clark’s model and the selected mechanisms should be made explicit rather than left to the reader’s interpretation.

2. The reasoning behind how the selected mechanisms differ from one another must be clarified, particularly between mechanism 1 (Appraisal of the trauma event and/or its sequelae that create a sense of current threat) and mechanism 2 (Appraisals and emotional responses). Most importantly, the authors should explain how this distinction guided the allocation of studies to Reviews 1 and 2. For instance, in Review 2 (page 8, section 3.2) emotions and feelings associated with appraisals of the traumatic event are listed, including fear. Yet a study on fear and PTSD was also included in Review 1 (see study 4, Basoglu et al., 2005). Similarly, studies on optimism and self-esteem appear inconsistently across Reviews 1, 2, and 4 (please see studies 7, 24, 33, 45, 72, 73). The same inconsistency applies to perceived social support and social coherence (see Review 2, study 48, vs. Review 4, study 73).

<b>Hence the important question: </b>What were the criteria for allocating studies to specific Reviews? Not just search terms, but clear criteria for allocating studies to specific Reviews at final stage, after they were selected by system with the help of search terms. Supplementary Table 1 provides search terms, but one can clearly see that Review 2 search terms include ALL of Review 1’s, thus it is not surprising that studies on the same topics ended up in different Reviews. This raises doubts about whether the allocation process was sufficiently systematic. A clear explanation of inclusion criteria is needed, followed by a re-check of study allocation to ensure logical consistency.

3. References with links to all studies included in the Reviews must be provided. Without them, readers cannot verify the findings or evaluate the validity of the systematic analyses.

4. Page 4, lines 12–15: “When this criteria was not immediately obvious, such as settings with recent but not current active conflict, or populations living with the legacy of conflict, we consulted the Uppsala Conflict Data Program (2025).” – It is unclear what exactly was meant by this statement. What was “not immediately obvious”? Was the uncertainty related to whether the setting could still be classified as an active conflict zone, or whether the population should be considered as currently living under conditions of CTS? Furthermore, if the authors themselves describe these cases as “settings with recent but not current active conflict,” then they fall under the exclusion criteria, and thus it should be clarified in what way the Uppsala Conflict Data Program helped resolve the ambiguity. Without such clarification, the procedure appears arbitrary, which raises concerns regarding the transparency and validity of the studies selection process. A more detailed explanation is therefore necessary.

5. Page 4, lines 19-21: “Our exclusion criteria was secondary studies like reviews, populations not under current war, armed conflict or political violence (such as settled refugees in non-conflict affected countries).” Yet Review 4 includes a study on Syrian refugees settled in Turkey (a non-conflict setting) (please see page 13, lines 23–24, study M from Supplementary Table 2). Thus, this study clearly contradicts the stated criteria.

6. Page 7, line 34: School shootings and demonstrators are listed as CTS contexts. School shooting is a single, discrete event rather than repetitive traumatic event, and thus falls under PTSD rather than CTS paradigm. Therefore, such studies should not have been included in the analysis (study B in Supplementary table 2). Similarly, the inclusion of demonstrations (study D, Supplementary Table 2) requires justification regarding their duration and whether they truly constitute a CTS context.

The key problem: <b></b>All these concerns No. 2-6 undermine the validity of the conducted Reviews, as it remains unclear how the process of allocating studies to specific Reviews was conducted, what were the criteria, and whether the entire process was logical, not arbitrary, and sufficiently systematic.

7. Please clarify why religion and social support are described as novel mechanisms (page 13, section 3.4.2.3), given their long-established role in stress-related research.

8. Throughout the Discussion, each time findings are summarized, references to the specific supporting studies should be included. For example, after statements such as “However, in children, this mediation effect was not supported” or “We found strong evidence for the role of cognitive appraisals and traumatic stress symptoms, particularly for adults”, citations of exact Reviews and Studies would be very helpful.

9. Page 16, line 17: The manuscript states that “social support was identified as a key new mechanism.” This is unclear, as the role of social support has been widely recognized in research on stress-associated symptomatology. If the authors intend to emphasize the harmful potential of social support, this should be explicitly stated.

10. Page 17, lines 5–6: The authors write “We have also added a vertical mechanism of transgenerational collective suffering and survival that impacts on the individuals lived experiences” but provide no explanation of how this addition derives from the Reviews’ results. The same issue arises with the statements on intrusions, arousal, terror, collective suffering, survival, and the differential mechanism for coping strategies. These claims require explicit grounding in the Systematic Reviews findings to maintain coherence between the Reviews and the proposed model. Same applies to the entire second paragraph on page 17.

Minor concerns:

1. Please standardize the spelling of Ehlers and Clark’s model, as the manuscript inconsistently refers to Ehlers and Clarke (including abstract.

2. Page 4, lines 4–5: “We excluded the trauma characteristics element of the model has this has been well documented elsewhere for children.” – Please rephrase for clarity.

3. Page 5, line 10: “Extraction was conducting using” – proofread for grammar. Please carefully check the manuscript for typos and minor errors.

4. The title for Figure 3 (page 26) is missing.

5. Please check table numbering throughout the manuscript (e.g., page 6, line 6 should cite Table 2 instead of Table 1).

6. Please ensure consistency in subsection titles across all Reviews. For example, Review 1 uses “Study characteristics”, while Review 2 uses “Description of studies.” Additionally, Review 2 lacks a section on contradictory or limited evidence, which should be included for consistency.

7. In the flow diagram (page 26), mechanism 4 is titled “Behavioral strategies and coping processing styles”, whereas in the text it is named “Maladaptive behavioral strategies and cognitive processing styles” (page 11). Terminology should be harmonized.

8. Page 14, lines 5–6: “compelling evidence for additional mechanisms specific to this population not captured in the model.” – Please clarify and specify what these additional mechanisms are.

9. Figures 1 and 4 are of unacceptably poor resolution, with blurred text (especially Figure 4). Please provide high-resolution versions suitable for publication.

Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Thanks for allowing me to evaluate this important manuscript.

Abstract

- The objective must be clear, no ambiguous.

- Are there four systematic reviews or four searches?

- There is no clear methodology section. It does not adequately describe the structure of the review.

- The results should be more specific, taking into account the components of the model. In the current abstract, they are vague or brief.

Introduction

- It is very well developed.

- Check spelling and grammar.

- I would suggest, as an option, reducing its length and making it more concise.

Methods

- Check spelling and grammar.

- Are there four systematic reviews or four searches?

- I cannot identify how the four reviews relate to the three research questions stated in the introduction.

- I find difficulties in the approach of this review, in terms of the choice of design. I don’t know if a scoping or mapping review was appropriate.

- It does not state the framework used to carry out the “reviews.” It states that it follows the PRISMA criteria (although it is misspelled).

- You do not specifically state how you carried out the study selection processes for each review. This is because if it was the same authors, the probability of bias increases.

- Remember that the exclusion criteria should not be contrary to the inclusion criteria. You should review and correct them.

- The authors do not recognize what a database is and what a search engine is. For example, PubMed and Medline.

- Proper systematic reviews usually search more than three databases.

- Why did they take so long to publish this review? If the update was completed in November 2023, why the delay? This increases the likelihood of errors in the review. Furthermore, we could say that it is already outdated.

- I find such a low level of agreement worrying

- The quality assessment is inadequate; it does not report the tools used to perform it. This is one of the biggest limitations of this study.

Results

- In general, the search-selection results for each search should be clarified.

- There are documents cited in the introduction that are then search results.

- The beginning of each section seems to be a personal assessment or that of the authors, rather than results. Additionally, it has no references or support. Remember that in results you should limit yourself to reporting what you found. What’s more, it doesn’t even work as an introduction.

- The information sub-analyzed by age or age groups does not provide the expected synthesis.

I would recommend leaving the description of the studies and starting with the synthesis.

- I find the relationship between the synthesis and the questions you initially planned to be problematic.

- It is really difficult to follow the line of evidence in this study. Perhaps because of its length, but also because of poor synthesis of information.

Discussion

- Although it is substantial, well-focused, and has a clear path, it has serious problems in terms of comparing the results of each of the reviews or searches it conducted with the literature that has attempted to address this same topic. Therefore, it fails to make sufficiently important advances or statements derived from its results that support or debate the current evidence.

- It has noble and appropriate goals for what we see today, but it is based on methodological and results errors that make it unhelpful.

Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR4

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors address a critical gap in the literature by systematically examining the applicability of a leading cognitive model for PTSD in contexts of continuous traumatic stress. There is major global relevance for this work, and the proposed socio-cognitive model is a significant and valuable contribution with the potential to improve the contextual relevance of mental health interventions in humanitarian settings. The paper is well-structured, and the results section is particularly clear in its presentation of a complex body of evidence. I recommend it for publication pending minor revisions to further strengthen its conceptual foundation and methodological transparency. My suggestions are outlined below.

Introduction:

Two minor clarifications -

1. A clear definition of continuous traumatic stress early in the introduction, contrasting its core premise—ongoing and realistic threat—with the “post-trauma” assumption of existing models to guide the reader and sharpen the paper’s central argument. How does it differ from or might be similar to complex PTSD (ICD-11, which includes disturbances in self-organization)?

2. A brief justification for focusing the systematic review on the Ehlers & Clark (2000) model specifically would be helpful. How may it be more relevant than other cognitive models in a humanitarian context, or was the choice to review it due to it being the most widely used model? (a valid argument as well).

Discussion:

3. The proposed socio-cognitive model is a highly valuable contribution. To further strengthen it and facilitate future empirical testing, I encourage the authors to briefly elaborate on the proposed causal connections between its key components. For instance, you could explicitly state how the component of transgenerational collective suffering is proposed to directly shape a specific type of appraisal, such as distrust of state institutions or belief in the necessity of resistance. Providing this level of mechanistic detail would powerfully illustrate how these elements of the model interact with cognitive processes, moving it from a valuable conceptual framework to a directly testable one for future research.

4. The limitations section should be expanded to acknowledge the quality assessment approach, the consequent reliance on predominantly cross-sectional data for causal inference, and the moderate inter-rater reliability during screening.

The revisions suggested are minor and aimed at further clarifying the authors' important contributions and ensuring the manuscript is as robust as possible.

Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR5

Conflict of interest statement

I have no competing interests.

Comments

<b>Overall Value and Recommendation</b>

The manuscript presents a systematic review of the cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict, and political violence, aiming to evaluate and adapt theory and mental health interventions for populations experiencing ongoing threat. The review is both scientifically ambitious and practically relevant, making a meaningful contribution to mental health research.

The manuscript is methodologically strong and provides theoretical innovation. The major rational of the manuscript, the claim that Ehlers and Clark (2000) model is not relevant for continuous threat perceptions, is strong. It is a suggested paradigm that requires the development of a new model (STC). The synthesis of data from 81 studies is an impressive research effort, and the finding provide a good anchor for theoretical continuity. Including newer mechanisms such as collective social suffering, intergenerational transfer, and political injustice, uplifts the therapeutic discussion beyond the individual level. The manuscript makes a valuable contribution to the scholarship on trauma and mental health in contexts of ongoing violence, and suggests a new socio-cognitive model for CTS. By systematically dissecting and adapting established cognitive models, the authors identify critical limitations and offer a more contextually relevant framework that will benefit clinical practice and future research. The methodological rigor and theoretical insight are commendable, though presentation should be improved.

Please see constructive suggestions for every section, that could improve the manuscript for publication.

<b>Abstract</b>

The abstract clearly frames the problem, that existing cognitive-behavioral interventions assume trauma is in the past, while many populations face ongoing continuous threats. Major findings and the proposed adapted model are summarized effectively However, the summary of findings is somewhat dense and lists too many details for an abstract.

Suggestions:

• Consider streamlining sentences for clarity and impact by stating only the most crucial findings. For example, instead of detailing the nuances of every cognitive mechanism, emphasize the model’s practical and theoretical implications.

• Clarify the novel elements of the proposed model with a plain statement of how it differs from previous frameworks.

<b>Introduction</b>

The introduction provides an up-to-date summary of the global prevalence of ongoing traumatic stress due to war and conflict, grounding the study’s rationale with compelling data. The critique of existing cognitive-behavioral models and reference to Ehlers and Clarke (2000) contextualizes the gap in knowledge and practice. Yet, the text in some areas is verbose and repeats key points, and the instance, the differentiation between PTSD and continuous traumatic stress could be better clarified.

Suggestions:

• Page 7, Row 6: Change the reference to Table 2, or better - replace the headings of tables 1 and 2 and the corresponding references in the manuscript. In the current table 2, it’s important to differentiate between studies that specifically explored CTS and those who related to PTSD or mixed exposures. It would be beneficial to add a column, marking the type of threat on the study population: on-going threat, post-event, on-going hardship, or mixed.

• Shorten some introductory paragraphs, focusing each on its unique purpose (context, gap, research questions).

• Highlight and stress the difference between continuous traumatic stress and PTSD within society-wide contexts.

<b>Method</b>

The review adheres to PRISMA guidelines and provides a transparent breakdown of the search, inclusion criteria, and analytic approach.

Suggestions:

• The eligibility criteria and the rationale for grouping mechanisms could be simplified for readability. Some technical processes (such as consensus decisions on country eligibility) might be condensed or placed in supplementary materials. Summarize inclusion and exclusion criteria more succinctly.

• Add a schematic flow diagram to complement the narrative where the review process is described.

• For weighting of evidence, detail how methodological quality (longitudinal vs. cross-sectional) impacted synthesis.

<b>Findings/Results</b>

The results are structured by mechanism, presenting a nuanced review of cognitive appraisals, emotional responses, nature of trauma memory, and maladaptive coping. The tables summarizing studies add value and transparency. The findings section occasionally becomes repetitive, with overly detailed descriptions of individual studies. The role of protective factors and novel mechanisms could be given more focus in the results summary.

Suggestions:

• For each review subsection, consider ending with a condensed table or figure highlighting key consistent findings versus contradictions.

• Where limited evidence exists for specific mechanisms (such as children’s appraisals), discuss whether methodological limitations may explain these gaps (Page 7, Row 6–7).

• Use clearer sub-headings for each mechanism to guide the reader logically through the results.

<b>Discussion</b>

The discussion offers a valuable synthesis, connecting empirical findings to the adaptation of theory. Introduction of the new socio-cognitive model is substantial and theoretically original. Some arguments are repeated from earlier sections, and implications for practice could be sharpened. The limitations are acknowledged but could be more detailed.

Suggestions:

• By definition, CTS focuses on ongoing threats (war/terrorism), but the review includes 7 studies on refugees that have experienced PTSD, but after the events were dealing with social hardship (Ongoing Hardship), not necessarily defined CTS. Clarify the subject, justifying the broad generalization and how it strengthens the model (or filter out some of the studies where the threat was not clearly “real and present”).

• Clarify how the new model should change intervention design in humanitarian settings.

• Provide practical examples where existing interventions might fail due to unaddressed mechanisms. Expand on limitations regarding language biases and cross-sectional samples.

• Consider adding more directed recommendations for future research.

• Consider more explicit guidance on intervention design and future empirical directions to further enhance applied impact.

<b>References</b>

The references are recent and relevant, reflecting the latest scholarship (Page 19–20, various rows). Yet, there are occasional inconsistencies in formatting (extra spaces, punctuation, abbreviations).

Suggestions:

• Verify all citations (including the tables) and references for APA 7th ed. compatibility.

• Standardize the reference. For online sources and DOIs, follow current citation conventions.

• Carefully review for missing publication years and ensure all in-text citations are properly referenced.

<b>Language, Clarity, and Academic Style</b>

The manuscript demonstrates a strong command of scholarly language, with clear definitions and precise conceptualization of terms across all sections). The organization follows academic conventions. Occasionally, sentences are overly long or complex, which may obscure key points. The writing could be made more accessible without sacrificing sophistication. There are, however, a few issues that need to be addressed.

Suggestions:

• The authors suggested a new/alternative “socio-cognitive model”. Clarify whether it is a “new” model, or an extension or an adaptation of a current “cognitive model”, and then use a consistent term for the new model (“the socio-cognitive model for CTS”) throughout the manuscript.

• There seems to be an extensive usage in expressions like “found to be a significant predictor”. Try to use diverse wording.

• Use more passive phrasing throughout the manuscript, or use descriptive terms like “associated with”.

• Edit for sentence length and clarity. Break complex ideas into shorter statements.

• Avoid jargon unless it is defined or essential to the argument.

• Use active voice where possible to enhance readability, especially in methods and conclusions.

Recommendation: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR6

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Decision: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R0/PR7

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Author comment: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R1/PR8

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Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R1/PR9

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Comments

First of all, I sincerely apologize for the delay in providing my review. Unfortunately, I was not able to complete it as thoroughly as I would have wished.

In order to proceed with an accurate and rigorous evaluation of the revision, I would like to kindly ask the authors to clearly indicate exact page numbers in the manuscript where each reported change has been implemented. At present, this information is missing. For example, in response to my major concern no. 2, the authors state that revisions were made:

“o We have made the distinction between the searches in the text, for example distinguishing review 1 and review 2 in terms of cognitive vs emotional focus. We have also amended the language to four searches rather than reviews (in line with another reviewers comments) to demonstrate the interlinked nature of the searches.

o We have added clarity on the review process, including the inclusion of some studies under multiple mechanisms. For the purposes of the review we have clarified this by ensuring we only counted one study under one primary mechanism - but as many studies touched on multiple mechanisms, in the analysis they were referred to under more than one section.

o We have re-checked the Tables and made corrections based on the logic above, we believe they are now logically consistent.”

However, it is not possible to verify where these changes appear in the revised manuscript.

Please specify the precise locations (page numbers) where the revisions were introduced or where the relevant issues were addressed. If certain actions (such as reallocating cited studies to specific sections) were not explicitly described in the manuscript itself, I would appreciate it if the rationale could be provided directly in the responses to the reviewer’s comments.

This request applies to all responses. Without clear page references or explicit explanations, it is not possible to ensure the precision and completeness of the review.

Recommendation: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R1/PR10

Comments

Dear Dr. Bosqui,

Thank you for submitting the revised version of your manuscript. We appreciate the time and effort you have invested in addressing the reviewer’s comments.

Following evaluation of the revision, the reviewer has indicated that they were unable to complete a rigorous assessment of the revised manuscript in its current form. Specifically, while the response document describes a number of substantive changes (e.g., clarification of the review structure, distinctions between searches, and revisions to tables and study allocation), the reviewer is unable to verify where these changes have been implemented in the manuscript itself. As a result, it is not possible to confirm that the reviewer’s concerns have been fully and accurately addressed.

To allow the review process to proceed in a fair and thorough manner, we are therefore inviting you to submit a further revised version of the manuscript. In preparing this revision, please ensure that:

Each response to a reviewer comment includes exact page numbers (and, where possible, line numbers) indicating where the change has been made in the manuscript.

If certain actions or decisions are not explicitly described in the manuscript, the rationale is clearly explained in the response document.

This level of detail is provided consistently for all reviewer comments.

Please note that this request is procedural and intended to ensure transparency and precision in the review process. Once these clarifications are provided, the manuscript can be reassessed accurately.

We appreciate your cooperation and look forward to receiving your revised submission.

Sincerely,

Sara Romero

Decision: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R1/PR11

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Author comment: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R2/PR12

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Dear Editors,

We would like to thank the you again for your time and insights, we apologize for not having made our previous revisions clear. We have revisited the revisions and added detail to the responses, including corresponding page number in the manuscript.

We believe we have now outlined how we addressed each point in detail in the response to reviewers, and have attached tracked changes in the documents marked _revisions.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Tania Bosqui

On behalf of all the authors

Review: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R2/PR13

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

First of all, I would like to thank the Authors for the thorough revisions made to the manuscript and for providing detailed responses to the concerns raised in the first review. As a result, the major concerns have been satisfactorily addressed, and I would like to congratulate the Authors on this valuable article.

However, before the manuscript can be accepted for publication, several minor issues still require attention:

1) In response to the second major concern, the Authors indicated that they had added the following text on page 5, lines 22-23: “Search 1 focused on appraisals, search 2 on emotions, search 3 on memory, and search 4 on behavior.”

This is an important clarification to the manuscript. However, the cited text appears to be missing from page 5 of the revised manuscript. Please ensure that it is included in the text instead of simply saying that search terms can be found in Supplemental Table 1.

2) On page 16, the Authors use the term “better PTS.” While the intended meaning is intuitively understandable as the opposite of “worse PTS,” this formulation creates some semantic ambiguity. The phrase “better PTS” may lead to an odd interpretation (e.g., suggesting a “better kind” of post-traumatic stress). Please consider alternative formulations throughout the manuscript (e.g., lower / reduced / less severe PTS symptoms).

3) In the revised version of the manuscript, Figure 3 appears to be missing. Instead, there seem to be two identical pages containing Figure 4.

4) A further round of proofreading is recommended to ensure consistency in subsection titles across all Searches. For example, on page 8, subsection 3.1.2.4 in Search 1 is titled “Children,” whereas subsection 3.2.2.2 in Search 2 is titled “Child.” These are minor nuances, but maintaining consistency throughout the manuscript is important.

Recommendation: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R2/PR14

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Author comment: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R3/PR16

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Dear Editors,

I am enclosing the revisions for the manuscript entitled “When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict, and political violence” for consideration for publication in Global Mental Health.

We are grateful to the reviewer for the thorough review and have addressed all the points raised.

Many thanks for considering our paper. We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Tania Bosqui

On behalf of all the authors

Recommendation: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R3/PR17

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Decision: When the current threat is real: A systematic review of the evidence for a cognitive model of continuous traumatic stress during war, armed conflict and political violence — R3/PR18

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