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Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  15 October 2026

Zhongling Wan
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction (ESPDRR), Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China Institute of Land Surface System and Sustainable Development, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Changjia Li
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction (ESPDRR), Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China Institute of Land Surface System and Sustainable Development, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Xue Jin
Affiliation:
Institute of Space Earth Science, Nanjing University, Suzhou, China
Mingyang Lv*
Affiliation:
Institute of Space Earth Science, Nanjing University, Suzhou, China International Research Center of Big Data for Sustainable Development Goals, Beijing, China
Huadong Guo
Affiliation:
International Research Center of Big Data for Sustainable Development Goals, Beijing, China
Cunde Xiao
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction (ESPDRR), Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Xing Wu
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Urban and Regional Ecology, Research Centre for Eco-Environmental Sciences, Chinese Academy of Sciences, Beijing, China
Shuai Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction (ESPDRR), Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China Institute of Land Surface System and Sustainable Development, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Jingyi Ding
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction (ESPDRR), Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China Institute of Land Surface System and Sustainable Development, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Duncan J. Quincey
Affiliation:
School of Geography, University of Leeds, Leeds, UK
Lindsay C. Stringer
Affiliation:
Department of Environment and Geography, University of York, York, UK York Environmental Sustainability Institute, University of York, York, UK
Bojie Fu
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Urban and Regional Ecology, Research Centre for Eco-Environmental Sciences, Chinese Academy of Sciences, Beijing, China
*
Corresponding author: Mingyang Lv; Email: mylv@nju.edu.cn
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Abstract

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The glaciers of High Mountain Asia, a region which is known as “Asian Water Tower,” supply vital water resources to downstream dryland cities across several countries. Climate change threatens this region by accelerating glacier retreat and altering the timing, quantity, quality and variability of meltwater supply. This article examines how these changes affect water security across glacier-fed river basins and downstream dryland cities. We find that enhanced melt may temporarily augment water availability, but it also heightens the risks of flooding and glacial lake outburst floods (GLOFs) and may encourage socioeconomic development and water demand that become unsustainable after “peak water.” Continued glacier shrinkage will ultimately reduce runoff and threaten long-term water security. Much existing infrastructure and many water governance arrangements were designed using historical records of rainfall, snowfall, ice thickness, runoff timing and peak discharge hydrographs. As these baselines change, design thresholds, reservoir operations and water allocation rules need to be updated using new observations and basin-specific projections. These changes pose particular challenges for dryland cities, where inefficiencies in irrigation systems and limited reservoir regulation constrain the capacity to manage increasingly variable glacier runoff. To address these interconnected challenges, we propose an integrated basin management framework that combines legally and environmentally feasible glacier protection, meltwater storage and seasonal water regulation in upstream areas; ecosystem restoration, carbon sequestration and water retention in midstream areas; and improved water use efficiency, allocation and risk management in downstream cities. Implementation requires transparent monitoring and careful assessment of the environmental, technical, financial, legal and social trade-offs associated with different interventions.

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Figure 1. The Asian Water Tower and major glacier-fed river basins in High Mountain Asia. Glacier outlines were obtained from the Randolph Glacier Inventory version 7.0 (RGI 7.0 Consortium, 2023), major river basin boundaries from the GRDC Major River Basins dataset (GRDC, 2020) and river networks from HydroRIVERS (Lehner and Grill, 2013). The Tibetan Plateau Interior was delineated using HydroBASINS Level 4 data (Lehner and Grill, 2013). Country boundaries and lake data were obtained from Natural Earth.Figure 1. long description.

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Figure 2. Integrated basin-wide approach across the upper, middle and lower reaches, as well as within city centers. The framework synthesizes measures involving artificial reservoirs (Farinotti et al., 2019), ice stupas (Nüsser et al., 2019), glacier covers (Moore et al., 2018; Cao et al., 2025), wetland and peatland restoration (Acreman and Holden, 2013; Mitsch et al., 2013), ecosystem restoration (Farley et al., 2005; Jackson et al., 2005; Feng et al., 2016; Ellison et al., 2017), water-efficient irrigation (Howell, 2001; Perry et al., 2009) and qanat systems (English, 1968; Beaumont, 1971), within an integrated water resource management framework (Stringer et al., 2021).Figure 2. long description.

Author comment: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R0/PR1

Comments

March 20, 2026

Dear Editor of Cambridge Prisms: Drylands:

We are pleased to submit our manuscript entitled “Managing glacial ablation in High Mountain Asia to sustain dryland cities” by Dr. Changjia Li et al. for consideration as a Perspective in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

This study focuses on dryland cities in High Mountain Asia, where water supplies depend predominantly on upstream glacier meltwater. With global warming accelerating cryospheric changes, regional glaciers are projected to retreat rapidly and may eventually disappear, posing significant threats to water security in dryland cities. Increasing water availability due to glacial melt often accelerates socio-economic development, which then boosts water demand—a classic positive feedback loop that can precipitate the earlier arrival of “peak water” and drive the system toward unsustainability. This mutual reinforcement is recognized as a major challenge in High Mountain Asia river basins such as the Indus, Ganges, Brahmaputra, and Pearl River, where increasing demands due to population and economic growth outpace the temporary gains from climate-driven water surpluses. Drawing on these insights, we propose integrated watershed management strategies linking upstream, midstream, and downstream regions: upstream efforts focus on preserving ice reserves and mitigating glacier ablation; midstream actions aim to enhance carbon sequestration and bolster water retention; and downstream strategies prioritize efficient water-resource management. We contend that through such a coupled human-natural systems approach—blending systemic, market, engineering, and ecological solutions—can we decouple development from water scarcity and ensure long-term water security.

We believe this manuscript is well suited to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands, as it offers a synthesis of cryospheric change, hydrological processes, and dryland sustainability within a unified framework. The Perspective provides both conceptual insights and practical implications, contributing to interdisciplinary dialogue and informing policy-relevant strategies for managing water resources in climate-sensitive dryland regions.

As potential referees, we suggest the following experts:

1.Professor Xin Li, Institute of Tibetan Plateau Research, Chinese Academy of Sciences, China. Email: xinli@itpcas.ac.cn.

Professor with strong expertise in cryospheric science and integrated watershed.

2.Professor Jian Sun, Institute of Tibetan Plateau Research, Chinese Academy of Sciences, China. Email: sunjian@itpcas.ac.cn.

Professor with strong expertise in dryland ecosystems and climate–water interactions.

3.Professor Weicai Wang, Institute of Tibetan Plateau Research, Chinese Academy of Sciences, China. Email: weicaiwang@itpcas.ac.cn.

Professor with strong expertise in glacial lake dynamics and related hazards.

This manuscript has not been published previously and is not under consideration elsewhere. All authors have approved the manuscript and agree to its submission to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands. The authors declare no competing interests.

Thank you for your consideration. We look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Mingyang Lv

Institute of Space Earth Science, Nanjing University,

Suzhou, China

Postcode: 215163

mylv@nju.edu.cn

Review: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

I declare no competing interests. I have not however cross-checked references and citations are correct and in accord to the publishers style guidelines - I presume they will be done when R1 is re-submitted and at dtp editing. I have suggested other key references be included for thoroughness, and they need insertion into the text at appropriate places (see my comments below). If any questions please do not hesitate to contact me.

Comments

Review of DRY-2026-004

Managing glacial ablation in High Mountain Asia to sustain dryland cities

Recommendation: ACCEPT WITH MINOR REVISIONS

To the Author(s)

I found this paper to be well-researched, well-written, and easy-to-read. It is new and innovative insofar as it specifies observations and actions to consider for an immediate emerging ‘crisis’ (author(s) words – not mine). It is an elegant piece of work that is a good-fit for the Journal and would appeal to practitioners, policy-makers and academics in drylands.

I have mostly general comments and clarification questions to raise with the author(s). I would be still happy to see most of these points provided in a ‘limitations’ or ‘future work’ section from the study because they may well be deliberately beyond the scope of the work but still need alluding to, to show thoroughness.

GENERAL COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS

Suggested alternative titles:

The current title implies this work is primarily based on cities, but it also covers other aspects including upstream and downstream basins and landscapes, groundwater, etc. Therefore, I suggest an alternative title may be more accurate and also more appealing to a broader readership, such as…

…Addressing climate change and dryland catchments under changing glaciation and water supply – with a focus on cities…

This would catch the eye of a broader readership and also have appeal to land managers, water managers, city-planners, practitioners, researchers, emergency management, weather/glaciation/water forecasters, law-makers/policy-makers and academics in drylands. This is because if the papers implications and recommendations are followed, it would involve coordination of such a cohort.

Clarifications and comments (not necessarily in any order of importance)

The 250 million people affected population – are they from the same country or neighbouring countries too? This is important because if just one country, planning is easier than otherwise if it involves glaciers/rivers that cross international boundaries. If the paper limits itself to one country, fine, but if it is intending to cover multiple countries, then it needs to cover broader aspects. This needs clarification at the beginning. At the moment, it is unclear and so a reader’s expectations may be that the paper offers more than it alludes to and so a reader may be disappointed. My comments involves where multiple countries are involved and so may be clarified accordingly if the authors describe exactly where their boundaries are in the paper in regards to this matter.

When it is alluded to that there are numerous river systems affecting drylands, a figure showing where they are in Asia would be helpful to the readership – they do not need to cover international boundaries if they are contentious, but they should show catchment boundaries because it implies cooperation and coordination are essential where these systems cross borders. It also provides to the readership the author(s) respect of the importance of water, groundwater and connectivity from upstream to downstream people, ecosystems and the vast distances affected (plus laws and treaties if involving multiple countries).

Mooting of the importance of monitoring, ratification and verification of the baseline observed and expected volumes of water as part of good governance should be detailed and emphasised in future work. This should include not just water, but also costs and benefits, and also be inclusive of GHG accounting and justification that interventions are not mal-adaptations.

The Groundwater aspects and interconnectivity are currently cursory but should again be highlighted in ‘limitations’ and ‘future work’ to prove they are not being dismissed, especially if international boundaries are involved (with legal agreements developed and revisions inserted at key intervals). Likewise, if downstream groundwater users are potential ‘beneficiaries’ or ‘penalised’ by potential drawdowns, their treatments should be alluded to in a section that addresses ‘safeguards.’ This should also touch on how ‘primary agricultural land’ is protected. If beyond the scope of this paper, it can be noted as such, and identified as either future work or as a limitation.

Safeguards of water harvesting with the threat of glacial collapse needs strengthening. In addition, how water-users associations could and should be strengthened given how new and changing climate change information is forthcoming. This also brings to light how and when new climate change information is communicated so as to be transparent and inclusive of key stakeholders and end-users in a spirit of cooperation for success.

The limitations of population growth are not described in any detail, giving an impression unlimited population growth is unavoidable. This needs attention.

On page 2 lines 33-34, it is stated that “…existing infrastructure and governance systems are often ill-equipped…” I find this a little harsh. These systems have been designed addressing historical rainfall/snowfall/ice-depth and peak discharge hydrographs that are now either redundant and/or need revising with new observed/expected data, and thus new design ‘thresholds’ and ‘rules.’ What would be trigger points for when new peak-discharge hydrographs would be forthcoming and how they would be communicated needs detail in ‘future work’ and ‘limitations.’

Clarification of how soil and water conservation measures in rural areas and expanding cities go hand-in-hand with water availability needs strengthening.

Clarification of how water storage rules and dam-release protocols would be updated and communicated given expected differing recharge rates and times. Likewise, due consideration of design sedimentation and storage-life aspects should be clarified.

The increased urgency for mitigating GHG and sequestering C is a support for this work and needs greater emphasis.

Summarising the work into recommendations would be helpful. I consider minimum categories to cover would include:

(i) Implementing vulnerability assessments per catchment;

(ii) Basin-specific runoff projections; and,

(iii) Strategic policy recommendations for adapting to a changing and diminishing glacial water supply (including safeguards, governance, evaluation of progress and revision).

Suggested other key references that could be included and would be of interest to a global audience:

Damania R, Desbureaux S, Hyland M, Islam A, Moore S, Rodella A-S, Russ J and Zaveri E (2017) Uncharted Waters: The New Economics of Water Scarcity and Variability. Washington, D.C.: The World Bank.

Dickson E, Danilenko A and Jacobsen M (2010) Climate Change and Urban Water Utilities: Challenges and Opportunities. In: Water P-Notes; No. 50. Washington, D.C.: The World Bank.

Mani M (2021) Glaciers of the Himalayas: Climate Change, Black Carbon, and Regional Resilience. In: Mani M (ed) South Asia Development Forum. Washington, D.C.: The World Bank.

Review: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

General Comments

The manuscript addresses a highly critical and timely topic: the accelerating retreat of glaciers in High Mountain Asia (HMA) and its profound implications for downstream water security in dryland cities. The conceptualization of integrated basin management spanning upstream, midstream, and downstream provides a valuable holistic framework. However, several critical weaknesses must be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

Specific Comments

1. Data visualization in Figure 1a. The visualization in Figure 1a is currently inadequate. The map attempts to display multiple complex spatial datasets simultaneously—including glacier distribution, glacier elevation changes (dh/dt), and aridity index—but these layers obscure. The spatial resolution, color ramp contrasts, and legends are presented in a way that makes it virtually impossible to clearly distinguish where specific glacier losses are accelerating relative to the dryland boundaries.

2. Upstream glacier preservation and policy feasibility. In the discussion of upstream engineering solutions for glacier conservation (e.g., artificial reservoirs and technical interventions), the manuscript should also address the realistic policy and legal landscapes of the source regions. For instance, Xizang Autonomous Region has already enacted and strictly enforce Glacier Preservation Regulations. The feasibility analysis of upstream activities must be grounded in these existing policy frameworks. The authors should critically discuss this.

3. Midstream carbon sink and upstream glacial dynamics integration. The current logic in the midstream section feels disjointed from the upstream section. The manuscript introduces the enhancement of carbon sinks as a midstream objective. However, there is a lack of a clear, cohesive thread linking the glacier retreat at the source to the carbon dynamics of midstream ecosystems. Specifically, you should discuss the ecological cascades: how changes in upstream glacial run-off volume and timing directly dictate the soil moisture, groundwater tables, and hydrological health of midstream wetlands and forests, which in turn determines their capacity to function as active carbon sinks. Connecting these elements through the lens of “eco-hydrological feedback loops” will make the paper’s overarching basin-wide framework much more robust.

4. Data availability statement. The manuscript indicates the use of nighttime light data and population density data. However, upon a thorough reading of the text and figures, these datasets do not appear to be utilized, visualized, or analyzed anywhere in the manuscript. If they were not used, these datasets should be removed from the data availability section to maintain academic rigor.

Recommendation: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R0/PR4

Comments

Your manuscript has received two positive reviews indicating that it is well written and of great importance to drylands. Both reviewers offer important suggestions for increasing the strength and impact of your work.

The scope of the paper including the title may be strengthened by further revision. Could the phrase ‘Asian Water Tower’ be used in the title to attract greater interest?

The landscape or regional context associated with water security in dryland cities could be further emphasized including potential reference to ‘ecological cascades’ created by glacial ablation.

Greater specificity regarding recommendations for future action would also be of great value.

The inclusion of additional references to further document your perspective would further strengthen the piece.

Please consider revising the abstract and impact statement to include the key messages. The Impact statement could included some content from the paragraph beginning on line 109 as well as enhanced recommendations.

More specific keywords may include glacial conservation and water security.

The current version of the manuscript is relatively short so there is an opportunity to include additional content.

Decision: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R0/PR5

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Author comment: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R1/PR6

Comments

Dear Editor and reviewers,

Thank you very much for your careful evaluation of our manuscript and for giving us the opportunity to address the comments and suggestions raised by you and the reviewers. We sincerely appreciate the time and effort devoted to reviewing our work. The constructive feedback has been extremely helpful in improving the clarity, scientific rigor, and overall presentation of the manuscript.

We have carefully considered all the comments and revised the manuscript accordingly. A detailed point-by-point response has been attached to the revised submission, explaining how each comment has been addressed and indicating the corresponding changes made in the manuscript.

For the convenience of the Editor and reviewers, we have uploaded both a clean version and a tracked-changes version of the revised manuscript. The clean version incorporates all revisions, while the tracked-changes version clearly identifies the modifications made to the previous submission. The figures and supporting information have also been carefully checked and revised where appropriate.

We believe that the revisions have adequately addressed the concerns raised during the review process and have substantially improved the manuscript. We hope that the revised manuscript is now suitable for further consideration and potential publication in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands. Should any additional information, clarification, or further revision be required, please do not hesitate to contact us.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Zhongling Wan, Changjia Li, Xue Jin, Mingyang Lv, Huadong Guo, Cunde Xiao, Xing Wu, Shuai Wang, Jingyi Ding, Duncan J. Quincey, Lindsay C. Stringer, and Bojie Fu

Contact e-mail: mylv@nju.edu.cn

Review: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R1/PR7

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors have revised substantially to the manuscript, addressing the comments from reviewers and editor. I see the revised manuscript has good quality and clarity. I have only two minor additional comments:

1. Line 25 For the first sentence to define Asian Water Tower in the main text, the authors write “The glaciers of High Mountain Asia, which is known as Asian Water Tower”. Here Asian Water Tower is the glaciers. Then if we look at the title “Managing glacier change in the Asian Water Tower to ...”. Here Asian Water Tower is a region. So please consider to keep the same of the definition through the manuscript.

2. Some statements in the manuscript should accompanied with references. For example, Line 97-104, the cases in Nepal, India, Pakistan need refereces to support; Line 139-141, the hazards in southeastern Tibet doubled within a decade need a reference to support.

Review: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R1/PR8

Conflict of interest statement

I declare no conflict of interest

Comments

Review of DRY-2026-0004.R1

Managing glacier change in the Asian Water Tower to sustain dryland cities and river basins.

This is the second time I have reviewed this paper and so I will not repeat my pre-amble of its importance and who are the likely target audience.

Note for the editor:

I see the author order has changed since the original submission – this is duly noted, but unconventional at this stage of the paper publishing process. I consider there must have been significant justification for the change, and the author order has full agreement from all co-authors.

I also found the authors of the paper to be not as convincing in their language about their findings and recommendations and so have gone through line-by-line where I consider it could be strengthened. Once completed, this will be, I am sure, a benchmark paper for the journal and its readership.

Note for the author(s):

My main comments relate to the(i) title, (ii) Figure 1 and the (iii) creating and sharpening of the conclusion, and are below. I then follow this with some specific (iv) line-by-line comments.

(i) I suggest the title still needs to be amended to capture the essence of the work and attract as wide an audience as possible. My suggested alternatives are:

“Glacial Asian Water Tower changes: challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins,”

or

“Adapting to glacier change in the Asian Water Tower to sustain dryland cities and river basins.”

(ii) Figure 1 in its current form is unclear to the reader and should be replaced with a simpler generic map of the Asian Water Tower location and countries affected. The existing figure can be a supplement if seen as essential.

(iii) To help the reader assimilate the enormity of the research and its applications, I consider a conclusion to summarise the work and its recommendations would help the paper in its strengthening and being more concise and direct. I suggest you summarise what your research found and because of these findings, what are you recommending. See my suggestions below.

CONCLUSION

In summary, because of the following problems and challenges we found (viz):

• Increased glacial melt and depleting ice reserves due to climate change

• Greater variability in flows and their timing as a consequence of warming

• Increased demand for uninterrupted supplies of quality water because of population pressure and unabated development

• Hydrological flow dynamics need updating for accuracy to meet demands from changing peak flows

• Water flow, storage, sharing and allocation arrangements require new governance and safeguards frameworks (and therefore ‘rules’), to better manage risk and sovereignty

We therefore recommend the following:

• Rates of glacial change and water flows require an urgent response to coordinate short and long-term simultaneous solutions targeted to upper middle and lower catchments

• Address climate change by actions regards water adaptation and increase mitigation efforts to reduce emissions and sequester carbon, and consequently slow-down glacial-melt

• Initiate water data collection and information sharing to maximise efficiencies and better coordinate water security issues

• Update and reform water storage, capture, release and usage rules to accommodate for increased variability

• Governance and safeguards revisions that pre-empt unavoidable consequences from mistakes, poor choices, maladaptation and/or failures.

Benefits from comprehensively applying the recommendations outlined in our work will help sustain the social livelihoods and ecosystem functions of approximately 250 million people. Any delays of ignoring of our recommended actions will be a continued threat to the sustainability of this landscape and its inhabitants.

(iv) line-by-line comments

Page 2. Line 29: abstract amend to ‘….quantity, quality and variability of meltwater…’

Page 3. Line 39: abstract amend to ‘….inefficiencies in irrigation systems…’

Page 4. Line 60: change ‘….meltwater can cascade…’ to ‘….meltwater will cascade…’

Page 4. Line 63: change ‘….change can, in turn…’ to ‘….change will, in turn…’

Page 4. Line 66: change’…action should begin…’ to ‘…action must begin …’

Page 4. Line 69: change ‘….assessments can guide…’ to assessments will guide…’

Page 5. Line 80: change ‘….for a less predictable …’ to ‘…for greater variability and thus a less predictable …’

Page 7. Line 106: amend reference, citation and Figure 1 to ensure accuracy

Page 7. Line 112 amend ‘…to this century..’ to ‘…the remainder of this century and beyond….’:

Page 7. Line 120: correct ‘…glacier area…’ account for glacier area and volume

Page 8. Line 132: amend ‘ …planning should be….’ to ‘…planning must be …’

Page 8. Line 143: amend ‘…exceptionally challenging…’ to ‘…difficult, expensive, time consuming and fraught with high chance of failure…’

Page 9. Line 149: delete ‘generally’

Page 9. Lines 154-155: amend to ‘… need to upgrade design standards, reservoir rule curves and water release rules, water-allocation rights/licences and procedures…’

Page 10. Line 179: delete ‘seriously’

Page 11. Line 189: amend ‘…also requires coordinated…’ to ‘…must coordinate…’

Page 11. Line 193: amend to ‘…adaptation and mitigation strategies…’

Page 11. Line 195: identify and note source for Figure 2

Page 12. Line 209: amend ‘…in 2021…’ to ‘…in 2021, ….’

Page 12. Line 213: add ‘…. cascading processes into practical amelioration measures.’

Page 13. Line 238: qualify statement about snow-seeding effectiveness uncertainty with a citation and accompanying reference

Page 13. Line 238: amend ‘…They should…’ to ‘…They must…’

Page 14. Line 245-248: unclear sentence, please clarify

Page 16. Line 295: amend ‘…therefore needs to connect…’ to ‘…therefore must connect …’

Page 16. Line 300: amend ‘…keep more water in the soil…’ to ‘…capture and collect soil water and allow for infiltration into shallow groundwater …’

Page 16. Line 301: amend ‘…reduce erosion …’ to ‘…conserve soil and water, and maintain and improve soil condition and health…’

Page 17. Line 308: amend ‘…scheduling can …’ to ‘…scheduling will…’

Page 18. Line 331: add from ‘…movement.’ to ‘….movement without excessive leakage.’

Page 18. Line 336: clarify to something like ‘…legally binding safeguards should be designed, developed and implemented. This will protect recharge areas and, as a last resort, provide compensation or …’

Page 18. Line 339: amend to ‘Reliable and timely ….’

Page 18. Line 340-344: clarify and justify with supporting citations and reference(s). amend in line 341 ‘…big data potentially offer…’ Unfounded statement in sentence 342-344 – please qualify.

Page 19. Line 360: amend ‘…difficult…’ to ‘…challenging…’

Page 20. Line 379: amend to ‘…evaluate the trade-offs and cost-effectiveness, …’

Page 20. Line 383: ‘…mechanisms should …’ to ‘…mechanisms must…’

Page 20. Line 389: amend ‘Addressing …’ to ‘Implementing …’

Recommendation: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R1/PR9

Comments

The authors have thoroughly revised the manuscript which has greatly improved both clarity and impact. The reviewers have suggested several minor changes to further improve the paper and the authors are encouraged to incorporate those they consider appropriate.

As handling editor, I offer the following suggestions.

1. An ‘Impact Statement’ with a maximum of 300 words is required and it immediately follows the abstract. The purpose, as the heading implies, is to summarize the broad implications and consequences. These have been clearly addressed so they should be easy to summarize. You may wish to move those that have been developed in the abstract and place them in the impact statement. A portion of the content that Reviewer #2 has identified for the Conclusions could be placed in the abstract, e.g. summary of what was done and found. I regret that this was not made more clear in the author submission guidelines.

2. ‘Managing’ appears to be appropriate in the title because recommendations are made for reducing the rate of glacial loss in addition to adaptation to increased melting.

Would ‘retreat’ or ‘loss’ be more descriptive than ‘change’ in the title?

3. Fig. 1 is difficult to clearly see and interpret. Can the quality be improved? Its value is in illustration of the magnitude or scope of the challenge. Is an alternative figure available?

Minor points

L. 179. Remove or replace ‘seriously’ with ‘extensively’.

L. 217. Can ‘bathymetric’ be defined.

L. 259. ‘Forest water stress’ may be clear, but revise, if possible, e.g., insufficient groundwater to support forest growth and survival.

L. 377. Consider a paragraph break here.

L. 391. These two sentences could be deleted and replaced with Reviewer #2’s text beginning with ‘Benefit from comprehensively applying …..’.

Decision: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R1/PR10

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Author comment: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R2/PR11

Comments

Dear Editor and reviewers,

Thank you very much for your careful evaluation of our manuscript, “Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins” (Manuscript ID: DRY-2026-0004.R1), and for giving us the opportunity to revise it further.

We sincerely appreciate the positive assessment and the constructive comments provided by the Handling Editor and reviewers. We have carefully considered every comment and revised the manuscript accordingly. A detailed point-by-point response has been included with the revised submission, explaining how each comment has been addressed and identifying the corresponding changes in the manuscript.

In this revision, we have changed the title to describe glacier retreat more precisely and better reflect the scope of the article. We have revised the Abstract to provide a clearer summary of the article’s scope, principal findings, and recommendations. A distinct Impact Statement, written in plain language and within the 300-word limit, now appears immediately after the Abstract. We have also included a graphical abstract.

In addition, we have replaced Figure 1 with a clearer regional map showing the Asian Water Tower, major glacier-fed river basins, river networks, lakes, and surrounding countries. The sources supporting Figures 1 and 2 have been clarified. We have added a new Conclusion that summarizes the principal challenges arising from glacier retreat and presents coordinated recommendations for the upper, middle, and lower reaches of glacier-fed basins. Relevant references have also been added, potentially ambiguous statements have been clarified, and the language has been carefully revised in response to the detailed comments.

We have checked the references, figure captions, Data Availability Statement, Author Contributions, Financial Support, and Competing Interests declaration. Both clean and tracked-changes versions of the revised manuscript have been prepared, and the figures are provided separately in the required format.

We believe that the revisions have fully addressed the comments raised by the Handling Editor and reviewers and have substantially strengthened the clarity, accuracy, and practical relevance of the manuscript. We hope that the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Zhongling Wan, Changjia Li, Xue Jin, Mingyang Lv, Huadong Guo, Cunde Xiao, Xing Wu, Shuai Wang, Jingyi Ding, Duncan J. Quincey, Lindsay C. Stringer, and Bojie Fu

Contact e-mail: mylv@nju.edu.cn

Recommendation: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R2/PR12

Comments

The authors are to be commended for preparing an excellent second revision. Modifications to the abstract, impact statement and conclusions have further enhanced clarity and impact since they are the most read sections of a paper. The alternate figure 1 more effectively illustrates the glacial Asian Water Tower. This figure could make an effective graphic abstract if the colors and legends were enhanced.

Decision: Glacial Asian Water Tower retreat: Challenges and recommendations for sustaining dryland cities and river basins — R2/PR13

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