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Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  27 October 2026

Pedro M. Monarrez*
Affiliation:
Department of Geosciences, Virginia Tech , USA
Adam D. Woods
Affiliation:
Department of Geological Sciences, California State University, Fullerton , USA
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Corresponding author: Pedro M. Monarrez; Email: pmonarrez@vt.edu
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Abstract

Global diversity patterns delineate the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction as the sixth-largest of the Phanerozoic, with 26–28% of genera extinct. Studies of Serpukhovian marine assemblages from North America, however, exhibit stable diversity patterns across the Serpukhovian–Bashkirian boundary. These studies provide evidence against an extinction event during the Serpukhovian, with observed taxonomic turnover attributable to extirpation and facies preservation rather than true extinction. Here, we provide further insight into the Serpukhovian extinction at the mid-Carboniferous Global Boundary Stratotype Section and Point in Arrow Canyon, southern Nevada, US. Assessing brachiopod assemblages within their facies context, we test for evidence of the Serpukhovian mass extinction. Results reveal that 39% of Serpukhovian genera are absent from the Bashkirian at Arrow Canyon. However, global stratigraphic ranges reveal that all but two Serpukhovian taxa persisted into the Bashkirian. Multivariate analysis reveals similar taxonomic composition between the Serpukhovian and Bashkirian assemblages, with a notable lithological gradient driving local variation between geologic units. These results further suggest the absence of a late Serpukhovian extinction event in North America and highlight how working with the structure of the stratigraphic record can separate biological signals from stratigraphic patterns.

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Figure 1. Geographic location and geologic context of Arrow Canyon. (A) Location of Arrow Canyon in southern Nevada, with the inset showing the topographic map of Arrow Canyon that includes the location of the global boundary stratotype section and point (GSSP) for the base of the Bashkirian stage (Brand and Brenckle, 2001). The contour intervals on the topographic map are in feet. A photo of the exposed GSSP section is provided in the Supplementary Materials (Supplementary Figure S1. (B) Chronostratigraphic chart of the mid-Carboniferous section at Arrow Canyon (Bishop et al., 2010). Abbreviations for chronostratigraphic chart: N.A. Stage – North American regional stage; Faunal Zone – S-M Sinuatus-Minutus. (C) Facies model of the study interval at Arrow Canyon. The numbers below each depositional environment represent the total number of culled samples from each facies for each geologic stage included in this study, with the numbers in parentheses indicating the total number of samples. SL: sea level; FWWB: fair-weather wave base; SWWB: storm-weather wave base; Bash.: Bashkirian; Serp.: Serpukhovian.Figure 1. Long description.

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Figure 2. Two-way cluster analysis of culled brachiopod occurrences. Gray squares indicate the occurrences of brachiopod genera. The Q-mode cluster is color-coded by facies, and the A-markers are color-coded by geologic age. Samples with a single occurrence and singleton genera were removed prior to analysis.Figure 2 long description.

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Figure 3. NMDS ordination plots of Q-mode culled brachiopod occurrences coded by (A) geologic age, (B) facies and (C) geologic formation. The arrows in (C) indicate the source of and direction of variation of NMDS scores; in this case, terrigenous silt content explains the variation of samples along axis 1 and diversity of generalist taxa explains the variation along axis 2.Figure 3 long description.

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Figure 4. Examples from carbonate shallow-subtidal facies in the (A) Indian Springs Formation and (B) Bird Spring Formation. The high terrigenous silt content gives the Indian Spring Formation its red color, whereas the lack of terrigenous silt in the Bird Spring Formation gives it its blue/gray color. The lack of fine-grained siliciclastics facilitated the silicification of fossils in the Bird Spring Formation (B). The black cap of the marker is 3.81 cm long.

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Figure 5. Stratigraphic ranges of mid-Carboniferous brachiopod genera sampled at Arrow Canyon. (A) Stratigraphic ranges of all genus occurrences from this study. (B) Stratigraphic ranges of culled genera from this study. (C) Global stratigraphic ranges of all genera from this study. Brachiopod occurrences at Arrow Canyon, at face value, indicate extinction percentages consistent with a mass extinction event during the Serpukhovian, whereas global stratigraphic ranges reveal true extinction for only two genera, far below previous global extinction estimates.Figure 5. Long description.

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02 April 2026

Professor Barry Brooks and Dr. John Alroy

Editors-in-Chief

Cambridge Prisms: Extinction

Cambridge University Press & Assessment

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United Kingdom

Dear Professor Brooks and Dr. Alroy,

Enclosed is our manuscript entitled “Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality”, which we would like to have considered for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Extinction.

The enclosed study tests for evidence of the Serpukhovian (Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction event at the Global Stratotype Section and Point (GSSP) for the mid-Carboniferous boundary at Arrow Canyon in southern Nevada, USA. This extinction event was initially identified from a large fossil database, which estimates a 26–28% marine genera extinction, ranking it as the seventh-largest of the Phanerozoic. Regional studies from North America, however, indicate that despite faunal turnover, diversity remained stable, and assessments of taxa that were replaced indicate they did not go globally extinct. Instead, evidence suggests that extirpation and migration are related to changes in facies.

In our study, we further test for evidence of this mass extinction event using a stratigraphic paleobiology approach that considers the stratigraphic context of the brachiopod assemblages to control for the effects of facies changes on the interpretation of community composition change. Our results suggest that brachiopod genera exhibit an apparent extinction rate of 39%, consistent with global estimates. Global stratigraphic ranges of these brachiopods, however, indicate true extinction of only 6%. Moreover, multivariate analyses reveal taxonomic turnover at the same stratigraphic interval where apparent extinction occurs. This stratigraphic interval marks a major change in lithology and suggests that taxa that disappeared likely tracked their preferred habitats elsewhere.

Overall, our study further supports regional studies that a mass extinction event during the Serpukhovian in North America is either muted or did not occur. This underscores the importance of considering the structure of the stratigraphic record to separate biotic signals from stratigraphic ones when interpreting major biotic events in the fossil record, particularly extinction events.

Sincerely,

Pedro M. Monarrez

Assistant Professor of Paleobiology

Review: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

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Review of: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality

Authors: Pedro M. Monarrez and Adam D. Wood

The authors present a detailed study of the faunal changes across the Serpukhovian-Bashkirian boundary at the global boundary stratotype in Arrow Canyon, USA. This interval of geologic time is marked by the onset of the Late Paleozoic ice Age. Based on their own occurrence data and field observations, and an interesting biostratigraphic dataset from the former Amoco Production Company, now housed at Iowa University, they show that the taxonomic turnover they observe can be explained largely by changes in lithology. This evidence argues for no strong signal of extinction at this site and is consistent with other studies across the North American continent that show no strong extinction signal. The Serpukhovian extinction is argued to be the seventh largest of the Phanerozoic, and the fifth largest in terms of ecologic severity. A significant implication of the study, is that if multiple sites in North America, do not show strong evidence of the effects of a mass extinction, what is going on elsewhere in the world.

I like how the authors approach this problem. The data and methods are appropriate to address the problem, and the results support the authors conclusions. That said, I have three major concerns that I think the authors must address before this manuscript can be considered for publication. I list these major concerns below, followed by several “minor” comments to improve the written text.

Major comments:

1. The fossil occurrences need to be available in a secure archive. For the author’s data, this should include the stratigraphic level, abundance counts (when available), and facies descriptions. It would be great if you can relate the occurrences to detailed stratigraphic studies of the area, such as Bishop et al. 2009, Bishop et al. 2010, and Brand and Brenckle (2001). Can you also make the Amoco data available in some form? This is a valuable data set, and it should be accessible.

2. In lines 358-367, the authors argue that the value of studying one section, if done right, can inform mass extinctions. I get what the authors are saying, but the value of their study is really enhanced by the availability of other studied sections around North America. If Arrow Canyon was the only section studied, the value of it alone would be much lower. We’ve warned against the study of individual sections as most fraught with stratigraphic overprint (Holland et al. 2025, Paleobiology 51(1): 44-61). I think it would be better if the authors argue that the Arrow Canyon Section expands the study of this extinction to the scale of the continent. Several implications flow from that. See no. 3.

3. The authors have missed the opportunity to expand on the implications of their work for understanding the Serpukhovian extinction. If there is little to no turnover across this boundary in North America at this time, then the extinction must have a strong geographic signal. If true, then the ecological impact must also have the same geographic signal. This will require the authors to discuss the ecological impact, which they have not described but only claimed by citing a reference. What is the ecological impact, and does it make sense that it could have a geographic component?

Alternatively, there is no Serpukhovian extinction. The Sepkoski papers (1986, 1996) cited for the extinction are old. Forty and thirty years later, how well do those data and analyses hold up? The authors hint at this issue, but don’t address it full on. They should. Their study and others suggest there might not be an extinction. If there is no extinction, what does that mean for the documented ecological impact? This needs a fuller discussion.

A third alternative, all the studies mentioned here tend to focus on a boundary, but what if the Serpukhovian is a long interval of elevated extinction that we have all assumed should be concentrated at the boundary, but it isn’t. Maybe extinction data averaged over five million years is confusing how we think about the duration of the extinction. If true, there could be an extinction but averaging over the duration of the interval would result in little change across the boundary. Raising such an issue adds value to this study, and extinction studies in general.

For publication in a journal that focuses on extinction, these implications must be raised and discussed in much more detail.

Minor Comments:

Line 80 — Change “genera” to “genus”

Line 80 — Can you describe what the ecological selectivity is?

Line 106 — The sentence beginning “Field studies…” could be deleted. The previous paragraph was all about the previous studies. Begin with sentence on line 107 “Here, we…”.

Line 124 — I suggest rewriting this sentence or adding a second sentence indicating that the Indian Springs is mostly siliciclastic sediments, whereas the Bird Spring contains more carbonate lithologies. Knowing this will help the reader with the rest of the descriptive information in this paragraph, and in the discussion of the two main clusters in Figure 2.

Line 126 — Delete “with large terrigenous siliciclastic input,”

Line 126 — Do you mean parasequences instead of sequences?

Line 138 — Should be “grainstones”.

Line 148 — “…a considerable portion of the Serpukhovian mass extinction affected brachiopods.” I find this wording awkward. What is a portion of a mass extinction? Can you rephrase?

Line 150 — Please make your fossil counts available in a secure archive. Also, can you make the Amoco brachiopod occurrences available? I understand that combining these two data sources is a little tricky, but it should be available. This also goes for the spreadsheet used for the cluster analyses and ordinations. Overall, I just had a difficult time knowing how much data you contributed and how much came from Amoco. Also, even though you converted to presence-absence, any count data should be reported, plus all the metadata like the facies descriptions.

Line 162 — “Brachiopod occurrence data were collected…” Are you referring to the data you collected, or the combined data. This is a good example of the data confusion.

Line 165 — “Temporal distribution of sampled stratigraphic horizons is equal…” Even though you explain this in the next clause of the sentence, I find this wording awkward. Can you rephrase? It begs the question whether you think you have sampled approximately the same time interval from each stage.

Lines 176-177 — Awkward wording. Perhaps just say “…taxa tracking their preferred depth habitats”. Delete the final clause.

Lines 184-186 — I think you are suggesting here that no additional adjustments for sample size need to be made. If so, please say it. As it stands, it is unclear how equal sample number and approximately equal sample size means no further cleaning or standardization is necessary.

Lines 193-194 — The complementary nature of cluster analysis and ordination as described here is watered down to be nearly meaningless. Ordination (NMDS, DCA, CA) were designed specifically to arrange samples and species along a gradient of change, that is then interpreted with external information. What is challenging once you have an ordination is to describe the change in taxonomic composition of the samples along the gradient. One would have to arbitrarily chop up the gradient and look at the taxonomic composition of each gradient segment. And what about axis 2? Cluster analysis solves this problem for you. Cluster analysis of samples is designed specifically to find groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition. Samples in a cluster group usually also have similar diversities. Once clusters are identified, you can overlay them on the ordination (by color or a symbol) and you then can say something specific about how the taxonomic composition (and diversity) of samples changes along the gradients in axis 1 and 2. Thus, these methods are truly complementary, as you say. But to say that cluster analysis preserves small scale patterns while ordination preserves large-scale patterns, just doesn’t capture the nature of the analyses at all. I am not asking for a detailed explanation as I have done above, but I think you can say something like, “cluster analysis defines groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition and ordination shows how those clusters are arranged along an environmental axis (or in environmental space)”.

Lines 196-207 — This is overall a great paragraph. I find that using the terms Q and R mode clustering is opaque for those who don’t know the methods. Although, you have described what each is doing. You might try to simplify it by specifically defining Q-mode analysis as finding groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition, and R-mode analysis as finding groups of taxa that tend to co-occur. That should help.

Lines 204-205 — In the past, I found that pheatmap has had less flexibility in clustering methods, so that a two-way cluster may be slightly different then just pasting together two individual clusters. This seems to be the case here as Figure S5 (you’ve labeled it S4) has a different topology than the R-mode in Figure 2. The same thing is true for Figure S4 and Figure 2. You should mention in the figure captions the difference in the topologies. Alternatively, you could strip the clusters from Figure 2 and reproduce them as Figures S4 and S5, or perhaps you could just eliminate these figures as essentially redundant.

Lines 218-219 — You are correct about the PCA rotation of the NMDS scores to a maximal variance orientation, but they are still NMDS scores, just rotated. You need to reword this because it is currently confusing.

Line 240 — Add the following to the end of the sentence after “distinct clusters”. “…of samples each characterized by a specific group of taxa.”

Lines 247-249 — I find this sentence confusing. You refer to the clusters, but then mention how the larger cluster contains “varying amounts of terrigenous sediment that generally decrease up section.” It’s the terrigenous sediment that decreases up section, not the cluster. I would suggest you emphasize only that the large cluster has a greater amount of carbonate sediments. This distinction is clearer for the reader. See my comment about line 124 above.

Lines 253-254 — I suggest adding some nuance to this statement. Something like, “indicating small differences among samples between ages”.

Lines 267-268 — My counts from Figure 5 check out for 5A (11/28; 39%) but not for 5B, where I count 5/21 for ~24% extinction.

Lines 281-282 — Please be more specific here. Say something like “These results suggest that last occurrences in the Arrow Canyon section are controlled more by lithologic changes than by global extinction”.

Lines 283-301 — There seems to be a lot of detail in this paragraph that could go in the introduction, or just deleted. Consider this if you need additional space to expand in other areas.

Lines 302-313 — I don’t fully understand how you interpret variation along axis 2 as containing more generalist taxa. Generally, given your ordinations, I would expect generalists to cluster near the center of the ordination since they occur everywhere, whereas the taxa occurring only in the Indian Springs will occur on one end of the ordination, and taxa that occur only in the Bird Spring on the end. You need to dive deeper into the data description to explain what you mean.

Lines 334-335 — “…scenarios of sea-level change…” This is vague. Can you be more specific?

Lines 341-343 — I think you need to expand the implications of this statement. For example, what about the dataset used to identify this extinction, and consider why this stands out as one of the more important ecological events in the Phanerozoic. See my general comments.

Line 355 — What do you mean by “stabilization of glacioeustacy”?

Review: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

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Comments

An interesting and important contribution; it raises several questions in my mind (please see my review)/CB

Review of Monarrez and Woods

This is an interesting contribution that sends a cautionary note: apparent mass extinctions may be the result of regional extirpation; regional studies of possible extinctions must be coupled with detailed understanding of facies and broader global data. It also addresses aspects of a probable bioevent that has sometimes been ranked as the 7th largest mass extinction and raises questions as to what extent this is an artifact.

The paper is quite well written; I have marked only a few corrections using tracking on the Word version of the manuscript. In addition, I would make the following slightly more substantive comments.

Line 24. This is not strictly an either/or case; demonstration of local extirpation of some or many taxa does not mean that there was not a bioevent. In fact, extirpation of a large percentage of fauna strongly suggests an important cause. It may not be mass extinction though this too cannot be ruled out from a local case study. That is why I added hedge words.

p. 74. Again, showing a relationship of extinction events to stratigraphic patterns may suggest

that the pattern is an artifact but may also indicate that both the stratigraphic discontinuity and a bioevent may have a common cause as suggested by Shanan Peters.

Line 82; give a reference or two for 7th largest mass extinction.

Line 180 comparing similar thickness or simply two stages is not too satisfactory what is

important is the amount of time represented; how much is in each of these two bins and is it

about the same?

Line 182. Can you explain a bit of what went into your interpretations of relative water depth,

particularly the zonation into shallow and deep subtidal and offshore facies? Or at least provide a reference to that work?

Line 191. According to Patzkowski and Holland (2012) and our own studies in the Devonian

(Brett et al., 2007b) water depth (onshore offshore gradients) are a strong control on tracking

assemblages. But your NMDS plots show little relationship between depth and generic

occurrence. So, an interesting question that might be raised later in this paper is: why are your mid Carboniferous assemblages responding so differently?

Line 250. Maybe reword this statement about “1 less”; I find it a bit unclear.

Line 308. Be clear on whether these are fresh or weathered? It is unusual for clastics to impart a reddish color; indeed, it is frequently the limestones that weather orange, at least in the eastern more humid areas.

Line 325. Interesting observation that is in inconsistent with most studies of gradient analysis in the mid Paleozoic. (compare my comments of earlier) consistent within the models of Powell and Stanley and Powell that the onset of colder conditions may have “winnowed” out more stenothermic forms leaving a “residue” of eurytopic generalists which in part may account for the long-term stability of faunas during icehouse times like Carboniferous and Neogene; see my discussion in Brett and Zambito (2026). I have little doubt that the game rules changed from early/mid Paleozoic to late Paleozoic time.

Line 334. It is important to note whether any of these genera reappear higher in the later

Pennsylvanian-Permian parts of the Bird Spring Formation. Otherwise, there is evidence that this whole suite of taxa was permanently extirpated from the Antler foreland basin. This is significant and suggests that although you don’t have evidence for true extinction at the Serp-Bash boundary that nonetheless there was an important bioevent then and not really just an artifact of unconformities or local facies change as per Holland effects.

Line 346. If nearly all of the taxa that appear for first time in the Bashkirian also appear at this

point globally then I think there is further evidence that the Serp-Bashkirian even if not

characterized by true mass extinction, did represent a sea-change in marine communities. Is there really evidence for a mass origination event?? Or do you think this too may be an artifact of widespread, nearly global unconformity at this level? How much time is unrecorded in that gap.

Line 384. It would seem that you are able to arrive at the important conclusions without detailed sequence stratigraphic analysis (though that may have been done in other papers, or dissertation which should be referenced. One thing that related to sequence stratigraphy that could/should perhaps still be addressed in this paper: is there really a gap/unconformity at the Serpukhovian- Bashkirian boundary in the Arrow Canyon section-I suppose that the Subcommission on Carboniferous Stratigraphy would not have put a Miss-Penn boundary stratotype there if they thought that there was an unconformity at or near that level. So then maybe there is not a sequence boundary type Holland effect bias here. The pattern is being controlled by something other than a big gap in the record. Something further to discuss!

References are in excellent shape (I checked all against the text and everything seems to be

correctly cited)

Illustrations are effective and very useful (though I would enjoy seeing more of the

brachiopods!)

Overall summary: I find this a very interesting and important paper, which like any important

paper raises many more questions. I have offered a few which might be discussed a bit in a few lines (if there is space). I certainly would not require this for publication-the paper stands well on as is-but I think they would further drive home the importance of the study.

This paper will be of interest to paleobiologists, evolutionary biologists, and sedimentary

geologists. I suspect that it will be referenced as a key contribution on Carboniferous

paleoecology and more broadly interesting to those who study mass extinctions. Thus, it is well suited to this journal and I strongly recommend publication with minor revision.

Recommendation: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R0/PR4

Comments

To begin I apologize for the delay in the decision, which is entirely my fault due to some ongoing distractions. Overall both reviewers are enthusiastic about this manuscript, as am I. However both reviews contain many good suggestions for improvements. I don’t think these amount to major revisions (and there is no “moderate revisions” option), so I have selected “minor revisions”. That said please do respond carefully to the concerns and comments of both reviewers. I’d particularly agree with reviewer 1’s assessment that the manuscript would be improved (and likely connect with a wider audience) if it spent a bit more time discussing the Arrow Canyon section in the context of other sections in Laurentia and globally, and considering the implications of this work for thinking about whether the Serpukhovian LAD cluster is a pure stratigraphic artifact, a protracted interval of significant turnover distorted by stratigraphic architecture, or something else.

Decision: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R0/PR5

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Author comment: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R1/PR6

Comments

19 August 2026

Dear Dr. Finnegan,

Please find attached our revised manuscript EXT-2026-0016, “Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality”, submitted for consideration at Cambridge Prisms: Extinction. We thank the reviewers for their careful and constructive comments, which have substantially improved the paper.

The most significant revision addresses Reviewer 1’s request to expand the implications of our results for understanding the Serpukhovian extinction. We have restructured the Discussion to address each of the three alternatives raised. We now describe the documented ecological impact of the crisis in detail and evaluate whether it could carry a geographic component; we assess directly how well the original taxonomic estimates hold up against occurrence-based analyses; and we consider, and ultimately argue against, the possibility that turnover was distributed through the interval rather than concentrated at the boundary. We have also revised the Conclusions to make clearer what our results imply for the global signal. A point-by-point response follows, with reviewer comments italicized and our responses bolded; all changes are marked in the tracked-changes version.

Sincerely,

Pedro M. Monarrez

Assistant Professor of Paleobiology

Responses to the editor and reviewers.

Handling Editor: Finnegan, Seth

Comments to the Author:

To begin I apologize for the delay in the decision, which is entirely my fault due to some ongoing distractions. Overall both reviewers are enthusiastic about this manuscript, as am I. However both reviews contain many good suggestions for improvements. I don’t think these amount to major revisions (and there is no “moderate revisions” option), so I have selected “minor revisions”. That said please do respond carefully to the concerns and comments of both reviewers. I’d particularly agree with reviewer 1’s assessment that the manuscript would be improved (and likely connect with a wider audience) if it spent a bit more time discussing the Arrow Canyon section in the context of other sections in Laurentia and globally, and considering the implications of this work for thinking about whether the Serpukhovian LAD cluster is a pure stratigraphic artifact, a protracted interval of significant turnover distorted by stratigraphic architecture, or something else.

Thank you for handling our manuscript and for your suggestions. No worries at all about the delay; it worked well with our summer schedule.

Reviewers' Comments to Author:

Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author

Review of: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality

Authors: Pedro M. Monarrez and Adam D. Woods

The authors present a detailed study of the faunal changes across the Serpukhovian-Bashkirian boundary at the global boundary stratotype in Arrow Canyon, USA. This interval of geologic time is marked by the onset of the Late Paleozoic ice Age. Based on their own occurrence data and field observations, and an interesting biostratigraphic dataset from the former Amoco Production Company, now housed at Iowa University, they show that the taxonomic turnover they observe can be explained largely by changes in lithology. This evidence argues for no strong signal of extinction at this site and is consistent with other studies across the North American continent that show no strong extinction signal. The Serpukhovian extinction is argued to be the seventh largest of the Phanerozoic, and the fifth largest in terms of ecologic severity. A significant implication of the study, is that if multiple sites in North America, do not show strong evidence of the effects of a mass extinction, what is going on elsewhere in the world.

I like how the authors approach this problem. The data and methods are appropriate to address the problem, and the results support the authors conclusions. That said, I have three major concerns that I think the authors must address before this manuscript can be considered for publication. I list these major concerns below, followed by several “minor” comments to improve the written text.

Thank you! We appreciate your comments and suggestions on the manuscript and for taking the time to review.

Major comments:

1. The fossil occurrences need to be available in a secure archive. For the author’s data, this should include the stratigraphic level, abundance counts (when available), and facies descriptions. It would be great if you can relate the occurrences to detailed stratigraphic studies of the area, such as Bishop et al. 2009, Bishop et al. 2010, and Brand and Brenckle (2001). Can you also make the Amoco data available in some form? This is a valuable data set, and it should be accessible.

We agree. The hyperlink in the main document was incorrect and did not direct users to the Cambridge Open Engage page that contains the dataset used in this study. I have also added a separate spreadsheet that contains only the AMOCO data. The original files are PDF scans of handwritten notes; we extracted only the data for the interval covered in this study. You can access the data and code here: https://doi.org/10.33774/coe-2026-t3tnp-v2

2. In lines 358-367, the authors argue that the value of studying one section, if done right, can inform mass extinctions. I get what the authors are saying, but the value of their study is really enhanced by the availability of other studied sections around North America. If Arrow Canyon was the only section studied, the value of it alone would be much lower. We’ve warned against the study of individual sections as most fraught with stratigraphic overprint (Holland et al. 2025, Paleobiology 51(1): 44-61). I think it would be better if the authors argue that the Arrow Canyon Section expands the study of this extinction to the scale of the continent. Several implications flow from that. See no. 3.

We agree that this distinction is important. The purpose of that statement was to indicate the possibility of carrying out a stratigraphic paleobiology approach when only a single section is available. Ideally, we’d have multiple sections from the same basin to compare with. We edited this section of text in the manuscript to reflect this.

3. The authors have missed the opportunity to expand on the implications of their work for understanding the Serpukhovian extinction. If there is little to no turnover across this boundary in North America at this time, then the extinction must have a strong geographic signal. If true, then the ecological impact must also have the same geographic signal. This will require the authors to discuss the ecological impact, which they have not described but only claimed by citing a reference. What is the ecological impact, and does it make sense that it could have a geographic component?

Alternatively, there is no Serpukhovian extinction. The Sepkoski papers (1986, 1996) cited for the extinction are old. Forty and thirty years later, how well do those data and analyses hold up? The authors hint at this issue, but don’t address it full on. They should. Their study and others suggest there might not be an extinction. If there is no extinction, what does that mean for the documented ecological impact? This needs a fuller discussion.

A third alternative, all the studies mentioned here tend to focus on a boundary, but what if the Serpukhovian is a long interval of elevated extinction that we have all assumed should be concentrated at the boundary, but it isn’t. Maybe extinction data averaged over five million years is confusing how we think about the duration of the extinction. If true, there could be an extinction but averaging over the duration of the interval would result in little change across the boundary. Raising such an issue adds value to this study, and extinction studies in general.

For publication in a journal that focuses on extinction, these implications must be raised and discussed in much more detail.

We thank the reviewer for these thoughtful and insightful comments on expanding the implications of our study. We have substantially expanded the discussion section to consider the ecological implications of this extinction event, noting that these ecological factors (the turnover of crinoids and rugose corals) appear to have been driven by the structure of the stratigraphic record elsewhere, which parallels qualitative observations we made at Arrow Canyon. We have also expanded the discussion to consider that the extinction event might have been geographically constrained to regions outside Laurentia. Moreover, we consider whether there was no global extinction at all, and evaluate global compilations based on range-through and occurrence data. We argue that, since extinctions are thought to be pulsed at the ends of time bins, per Michael Foote’s work, a pulsed extinction should be expected at the mid-Carboniferous boundary. Since there is no evidence of a biologically driven pulsed extinction at Arrow Canyon, brachiopod extinction is most likely not to have occurred.

Minor Comments:

Line 80 — Change “genera” to “genus”

Genera was replaced by genus

Line 80 — Can you describe what the ecological selectivity is?

We included language to describe selectivity and expanded on it in the Discussion section.

Line 106 — The sentence beginning “Field studies…” could be deleted. The previous paragraph was all about the previous studies. Begin with sentence on line 107 “Here, we…”.

Agreed and deleted

Line 124 — I suggest rewriting this sentence or adding a second sentence indicating that the Indian Springs is mostly siliciclastic sediments, whereas the Bird Spring contains more carbonate lithologies. Knowing this will help the reader with the rest of the descriptive information in this paragraph, and in the discussion of the two main clusters in Figure 2.

Agreed and changed.

Line 126 — Delete “with large terrigenous siliciclastic input,”

Agreed and deleted.

Line 126 — Do you mean parasequences instead of sequences?

These are full sequences, bounded by combined sequence boundaries and flooding surfaces.

Line 138 — Should be “grainstones”.

Fixed

Line 148 — “…a considerable portion of the Serpukhovian mass extinction affected brachiopods.” I find this wording awkward. What is a portion of a mass extinction? Can you rephrase?

The sentence was edited to clarify that many of the victims of extinction include brachiopods.

Line 150 — Please make your fossil counts available in a secure archive. Also, can you make the Amoco brachiopod occurrences available? I understand that combining these two data sources is a little tricky, but it should be available. This also goes for the spreadsheet used for the cluster analyses and ordinations. Overall, I just had a difficult time knowing how much data you contributed and how much came from Amoco. Also, even though you converted to presence-absence, any count data should be reported, plus all the metadata like the facies descriptions.

We agree. We have fixed the hyperlink to the data repository, which contains .csv files with occurrence data and sample properties.

Line 162 — “Brachiopod occurrence data were collected…” Are you referring to the data you collected, or the combined data. This is a good example of the data confusion.

The sentence was edited for clarity.

Line 165 — “Temporal distribution of sampled stratigraphic horizons is equal…” Even though you explain this in the next clause of the sentence, I find this wording awkward. Can you rephrase? It begs the question whether you think you have sampled approximately the same time interval from each stage.

Agreed. The two intervals are similar in age, but subsidence increased during the Pennsylvanian at Arrow Canyon (Bishop et al. 2010), so they don’t exactly match in temporal duration. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

Lines 176-177 — Awkward wording. Perhaps just say “…taxa tracking their preferred depth habitats”. Delete the final clause.

Agreed, and the sentence was edited for clarity.

Lines 184-186 — I think you are suggesting here that no additional adjustments for sample size need to be made. If so, please say it. As it stands, it is unclear how equal sample number and approximately equal sample size means no further cleaning or standardization is necessary.

Agreed. The sentence was edited for clarity.

Lines 193-194 — The complementary nature of cluster analysis and ordination as described here is watered down to be nearly meaningless. Ordination (NMDS, DCA, CA) were designed specifically to arrange samples and species along a gradient of change, that is then interpreted with external information. What is challenging once you have an ordination is to describe the change in taxonomic composition of the samples along the gradient. One would have to arbitrarily chop up the gradient and look at the taxonomic composition of each gradient segment. And what about axis 2? Cluster analysis solves this problem for you. Cluster analysis of samples is designed specifically to find groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition. Samples in a cluster group usually also have similar diversities. Once clusters are identified, you can overlay them on the ordination (by color or a symbol) and you then can say something specific about how the taxonomic composition (and diversity) of samples changes along the gradients in axis 1 and 2. Thus, these methods are truly complementary, as you say. But to say that cluster analysis preserves small scale patterns while ordination preserves large-scale patterns, just doesn’t capture the nature of the analyses at all. I am not asking for a detailed explanation as I have done above, but I think you can say something like, “cluster analysis defines groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition and ordination shows how those clusters are arranged along an environmental axis (or in environmental space)”.

We wholeheartedly agree. We oversimplified the complementary nature of these methods for space, but we have added your suggestions to improve clarity.

Lines 196-207 — This is overall a great paragraph. I find that using the terms Q and R mode clustering is opaque for those who don’t know the methods. Although, you have described what each is doing. You might try to simplify it by specifically defining Q-mode analysis as finding groups of samples with similar taxonomic composition, and R-mode analysis as finding groups of taxa that tend to co-occur. That should help.

We added text to explain what Q- and R-mode clustering are.

Lines 204-205 — In the past, I found that pheatmap has had less flexibility in clustering methods, so that a two-way cluster may be slightly different then just pasting together two individual clusters. This seems to be the case here as Figure S5 (you’ve labeled it S4) has a different topology than the R-mode in Figure 2. The same thing is true for Figure S4 and Figure 2. You should mention in the figure captions the difference in the topologies. Alternatively, you could strip the clusters from Figure 2 and reproduce them as Figures S4 and S5, or perhaps you could just eliminate these figures as essentially redundant.

After inspecting the figures, we have decided to remove the supplementary dendrograms, as Figure 2 is sufficient.

Lines 218-219 — You are correct about the PCA rotation of the NMDS scores to a maximal variance orientation, but they are still NMDS scores, just rotated. You need to reword this because it is currently confusing.

The sentence was edited for clarity.

Line 240 — Add the following to the end of the sentence after “distinct clusters”. “…of samples each characterized by a specific group of taxa.”

We added the suggested text.

Lines 247-249 — I find this sentence confusing. You refer to the clusters, but then mention how the larger cluster contains “varying amounts of terrigenous sediment that generally decrease up section.” It’s the terrigenous sediment that decreases up section, not the cluster. I would suggest you emphasize only that the large cluster has a greater amount of carbonate sediments. This distinction is clearer for the reader. See my comment about line 124 above.

Agreed. We edited the sentence for clarity.

Lines 253-254 — I suggest adding some nuance to this statement. Something like, “indicating small differences among samples between ages”.

Agreed, we edited the sentence for clarity.

Lines 267-268 — My counts from Figure 5 check out for 5A (11/28; 39%) but not for 5B, where I count 5/21 for ~24% extinction.

Not sure where we derived the stated number. We have edited the figure and text to correct the mistake.

Lines 281-282 — Please be more specific here. Say something like “These results suggest that last occurrences in the Arrow Canyon section are controlled more by lithologic changes than by global extinction”.

Agreed. The sentence was edited for clarity.

Lines 283-301 — There seems to be a lot of detail in this paragraph that could go in the introduction, or just deleted. Consider this if you need additional space to expand in other areas.

Noted. We made some minor changes to increase word space.

Lines 302-313 — I don’t fully understand how you interpret variation along axis 2 as containing more generalist taxa. Generally, given your ordinations, I would expect generalists to cluster near the center of the ordination since they occur everywhere, whereas the taxa occurring only in the Indian Springs will occur on one end of the ordination, and taxa that occur only in the Bird Spring on the end. You need to dive deeper into the data description to explain what you mean.

Our interpretation is based on the presence of 4 generalist groups, which co-occur across more than 1 facies: (1) Cleiothyridina, Spiriferellina, Anthracospirifer, Composita; (2) Rhipidomella, Antiquatonia, Buxtonia; (3) Kozlowskia, Hustedia, Orbiculoida, and (4) Neospirifer, Flexaria, Linoproductus. We don’t see a single central cluster of points because these groups mostly do not co-occur in the same samples. We have updated the text in the manuscript for clarity.

Lines 334-335 — “…scenarios of sea-level change…” This is vague. Can you be more specific?

Agreed. We clarified that Holland’s (2012) modeling suggests that sea-level fall does not necessarily produce the expected changes in the species-area relationship.

Lines 341-343 — I think you need to expand the implications of this statement. For example, what about the dataset used to identify this extinction, and consider why this stands out as one of the more important ecological events in the Phanerozoic. See my general comments.

Agreed. We have expanded this section to cover the ecological implications of this study.

Line 355 — What do you mean by “stabilization of glacioeustacy”?

We meant the stabilization of the accommodation rate relative to the high-frequency high-amplitude changes during the onset of the LPIA. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author

An interesting and important contribution; it raises several questions in my mind (please see my review)/CB

Review of Monarrez and Woods

This is an interesting contribution that sends a cautionary note: apparent mass extinctions may be the result of regional extirpation; regional studies of possible extinctions must be coupled with detailed understanding of facies and broader global data. It also addresses aspects of a probable bioevent that has sometimes been ranked as the 7th largest mass extinction and raises questions as to what extent this is an artifact.

The paper is quite well written; I have marked only a few corrections using tracking on the Word version of the manuscript. In addition, I would make the following slightly more substantive comments.

Thank you! We appreciate your comments and suggestions.

Line 24. This is not strictly an either/or case; demonstration of local extirpation of some or many taxa does not mean that there was not a bioevent. In fact, extirpation of a large percentage of fauna strongly suggests an important cause. It may not be mass extinction though this too cannot be ruled out from a local case study. That is why I added hedge words.

Agreed. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

p. 74. Again, showing a relationship of extinction events to stratigraphic patterns may suggest that the pattern is an artifact but may also indicate that both the stratigraphic discontinuity and a bioevent may have a common cause as suggested by Shanan Peters.

We agree and have added language to reflect that.

Line 82; give a reference or two for 7th largest mass extinction.

We have added a reference to this sentence.

Line 180 comparing similar thickness or simply two stages is not too satisfactory what is

important is the amount of time represented; how much is in each of these two bins and is it about the same?

Agreed. The two intervals are similar in age duration, but subsidence increased during the Pennsylvanian at Arrow Canyon (Bishop et al. 2010), so they don’t equal exactly in temporal duration. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

Line 182. Can you explain a bit of what went into your interpretations of relative water depth, particularly the zonation into shallow and deep subtidal and offshore facies? Or at least provide a reference to that work?

This is based on the combination of grain size, sedimentary structures, bed thickness, and the extent of bed amalgamation. We’ve added text to the manuscript describing how we arrived at our interpretations.

Line 191. According to Patzkowski and Holland (2012) and our own studies in the Devonian

(Brett et al., 2007b) water depth (onshore offshore gradients) are a strong control on tracking assemblages. But your NMDS plots show little relationship between depth and generic occurrence. So, an interesting question that might be raised later in this paper is: why are your mid Carboniferous assemblages responding so differently?

This is because we sampled mostly from shallow subtidal facies (which dominate this interval at Arrow Canyon), as the lower accommodation did not result in the deposition of facies representing deeper environments than the proximal offshore. This facies is also the most fossiliferous.

Line 250. Maybe reword this statement about “1 less”; I find it a bit unclear.

Agreed. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

Line 308. Be clear on whether these are fresh or weathered? It is unusual for clastics to impart a reddish color; indeed, it is frequently the limestones that weather orange, at least in the eastern more humid areas.

Agreed. We have edited the sentence for clarity.

Line 325. Interesting observation that is in inconsistent with most studies of gradient analysis in the mid Paleozoic. (compare my comments of earlier) consistent within the models of Powell and Stanley and Powell that the onset of colder conditions may have “winnowed” out more stenothermic forms leaving a “residue” of eurytopic generalists which in part may account for the long-term stability of faunas during icehouse times like Carboniferous and Neogene; see my discussion in Brett and Zambito (2026). I have little doubt that the game rules changed from early/mid Paleozoic to late Paleozoic time.

We agree. We’ve added text to suggest this process occurs during icehouse intervals and cited your paper.

Line 334. It is important to note whether any of these genera reappear higher in the later

Pennsylvanian-Permian parts of the Bird Spring Formation. Otherwise, there is evidence that this whole suite of taxa was permanently extirpated from the Antler foreland basin. This is significant and suggests that although you don’t have evidence for true extinction at the Serp-Bash boundary that nonetheless there was an important bioevent then and not really just an artifact of unconformities or local facies change as per Holland effects.

We did not sample above the interval of focus in this study, so we cannot say for certain whether the genera we encountered are stratigraphically above our interval, nor have we extracted brachiopod occurrences from the AMOCO biostratigraphic logs above it. That said, some of the genera we counted are included in student theses conducted under the tutelage of Ralph Langenheim Jr. at the University of Urbana-Champaign during the 1960s, 70s, and 80s. These studies focused on intervals higher in the section, but most were never published. We are reticent to make that claim in the text without taking time to evaluate these genera listed in the theses, but it is highly likely that many more of our genera are found higher in the section.

Line 346. If nearly all of the taxa that appear for first time in the Bashkirian also appear at this point globally then I think there is further evidence that the Serp-Bashkirian even if not

characterized by true mass extinction, did represent a sea-change in marine communities. Is there really evidence for a mass origination event?? Or do you think this too may be an artifact of widespread, nearly global unconformity at this level? How much time is unrecorded in that gap.

Based on the global stratigraphic ranges of the brachiopod genera analyzed in this study, only 1 genus originated during the Bashkirian, with every other genus originating before the Serpukhovian-Bashkirian boundary. So, we don’t think there is an origination event among brachiopods (at least not the genera we focus our study on); instead, it is likely a result of the “Mid-Carboniferous eustatic event” (Saunders and Ramsbottom 1986; Geology), which they argued lasted between 2 and 4 million years. I am uncertain if there are any updated figures for this hiatus.

Line 384. It would seem that you are able to arrive at the important conclusions without detailed sequence stratigraphic analysis (though that may have been done in other papers, or dissertation which should be referenced. One thing that related to sequence stratigraphy that could/should perhaps still be addressed in this paper: is there really a gap/unconformity at the Serpukhovian- Bashkirian boundary in the Arrow Canyon section-I suppose that the Subcommission on Carboniferous Stratigraphy would not have put a Miss-Penn boundary stratotype there if they thought that there was an unconformity at or near that level. So then maybe there is not a sequence boundary type Holland effect bias here. The pattern is being controlled by something other than a big gap in the record. Something further to discuss!

We agree. Subsequent work at Arrow Canyon, following the ratification of the GSSP by the IUGS, found no substantial unconformity at the Serpukhovian–Bashkirian boundary (Ellwood et al. 2007, Palaeo 3; Bishop et al. 2010, Geosphere), despite claims by Barnett and Wright (2008, J. Geological Society). That said, a significant subaerial exposure occurred between the Battleship Wash Formation and the Indian Springs Formation, resulting in a lycopsid grove establishing directly on the exposed carbonate ramp, evidenced by the preservation of an abundant Lepidodendron root network (stigmaria) and karsting, noted by numerous potholes filled with sand (Bishop et al. 2009). This unconformity is estimated to have lasted about 2 million years, based on the missing foraminiferal zonation, and is interpreted to mark the onset of significant glacioeustasy that characterizes the LPIA (Bishop et al. 2009, 2010). As it stands, the only major stratigraphic effect that influences how the fossil record is interpreted is concentrated in the lithological change between the Indian Springs and Bird Spring Formation.

The extinction at Arrow Canyon may have occurred coincident with the subaerial unconformity between the Battleship Wash and Indian Springs Formations, but based on studies elsewhere, including those in North America, and on the stratigraphic ranges of brachiopods from this study, this scenario is unlikely. Although the duration of subaerial unconformity is consistent with that estimated for the worldwide unconformity at the Serpukhovian-Bashkirian boundary by Sanderson and Ramsbottom 1986, the high subsidence at Arrow Canyon during this interval likely allowed preservation of the boundary relative to other sections worldwide (Bishop et al. 2010). As such, the timing of the unconformity does not match that observed elsewhere. We have added text to the manuscript to note the absence of an unconformity at the Serpukhovian-Bashkirian boundary at Arrow Canyon.

References are in excellent shape (I checked all against the text and everything seems to be

correctly cited)

Thank you!

Illustrations are effective and very useful (though I would enjoy seeing more of the

brachiopods!)

Thank you!

Overall summary: I find this a very interesting and important paper, which like any important paper raises many more questions. I have offered a few which might be discussed a bit in a few lines (if there is space). I certainly would not require this for publication-the paper stands well on as is-but I think they would further drive home the importance of the study.

Thank you! We very much appreciate your comments and suggestions.

This paper will be of interest to paleobiologists, evolutionary biologists, and sedimentary

geologists. I suspect that it will be referenced as a key contribution on Carboniferous

paleoecology and more broadly interesting to those who study mass extinctions. Thus, it is well suited to this journal and I strongly recommend publication with minor revision.

Thank you for your time reviewing our manuscript.

Recommendation: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R1/PR7

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Revisions generally look good! I won’t delay publication any further, but I would request that you consider extracted brachiopod occurrences from the AMOCO biostratigraphic logs above the study interval. Unless this would be a huge time sink it seems like a reasonable way to address the very important question of whether any of these genera recur further upsection. Absent that, I don’t quite understand the basis for this statement that “We are reticent to make that claim in the text without taking time to evaluate these genera listed in the theses, but it is highly likely that many more of our genera are found higher in the section.” If you don’t know and can’t easily find out, why are you confident that they recur?

Decision: Stratigraphic controls on the Serpukhovian (Upper Mississippian, Carboniferous) mass extinction at the mid-Carboniferous global boundary type locality — R1/PR8

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